Date: 02/06/2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Key to Forgiveness
Sweet mother of... I do not have words for this, i've readen this story since 2013 and I can't believe that this is the last chapter.
About the end, it was so real, I mean, it broke my heart read that Jim and Spock will not be together but I can't stand the idea of them being a couple again, not in a long time.
Thank you for this beautiful and heartbreaker fanfic, I really enjoy (and cry) it, really.
P.d: Sorry for my mistakes, english is not my first language.
Date: 11/10/2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 27: The hands of Fate
Oh my... this can't be good....
Spock is to much out of his mind...
A very good chapter as ever.
Jims meeting with his mother, with Salean... he make his statements with them.... and now with Spock too?
I hope Spock takes a deep breath an takes his chance in a good way..
Date: 11/10/2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 27: The hands of Fate
Oh oh oh! you can't leave it there!
Date: 09/06/2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 24: Painful Memories
This story is exceptional and I am glad you added the rape scenes because all thru the story I felt like I had missed a chapter. I wish you had just put the rape scene into the first chapter because it really wld have added so much impact to the rest of the story as we wld have better understoof what Kirk was going through. You did a great job writing the rape flashback although I do wish you had gone ahead and written all of the rape because it also wld have impacted the story and people who didn't want to read it cld just (as you stated) skip that section. These changes I think wld take yr story up even higher as I write fanfic as well so I have learned a lot about taking a story from great to amazing. But overall I give you nothing but KUDOS and praise and I thank you for sharing your talent. :-)
Thank you. I will be honest. It was a push to write that chapter because it was something I had never done before and it was a bit uncomfortable. It was a learning experience and you would be right. I think I pushed it back so far because I didn't want to offend my reads. But there are some times you need to push that.
But again, thank you.
Date: 09/05/2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Death of Secrets
Love this story and reading it for the 2nd or even 3rd time! Only one minor thing bugging me in this chapter is the spelling of "fucken" which drove me a little crazy - poss because of the amt of times it was said. It's not that I find it offensive it's just that most people spell it like this: - fuckin' - as slang for the word fucking. Not a major bid deal - just was buggin' me :-)
To be honest, I am not good with slang. haha. or many grammar in general. haha. But thank you for being it to my attention.
Date: 07/18/2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 23: Not Ready to make nice
Hey!! firts of all I love your story, I even enjoy the suffering you make me feel!! (Really, some paragraphs broke my heart in ways you can not even imagine)
I agree, you can't give us a happy ending without some justice! I mean, I know that Jim needs to forgive them, not for them but for him, but that doesn't mean that he'll forget all the things they did to him.
Honestly I do not like the idea of him beeing with Spock in love again... I don't know, I hate this Spock for his stupidity, it's not fair that he'll be forgiven. I'm angry with him!!
Again, I love your story, please update soon!!
P.s: Sorry if I made a mistake, it's been a while since I write a review in english.
Date: 06/13/2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Ride of Defeat
I really do hope that we will see and update within the month. I just cried at what Jim has been through and that the people that he trusted the most turned on him especially Spock. I could not believe that Spock reacted that way especially not Jim a chance to say anything at all in his defense. That made me feel very disappointed in Spock. I know that it will not he all hearts and roses for those that betrayed Jim to get him to trust him again especially Spock but I just hope that he will realize that part of getting over this is to confront those problems and move forward and I think he needs to retake command of the Enterprise to make that move in healing and to make those that made him feel even more worthless to feel the shame at what they did and have to work even harder in earning his trust again. I just hope that he and Spock will not be apart for a long time because they truly do love each other and are a part of each others soul. I know it can not happen instantly but have Jim make him grovel for his forgiveness and then grovel even more to get his trust and love back. I say make the others do the same in earning his trust and friendship back and I think that Uhura has to be the last one to get his forgiveness because if not for her I think that Spock and McCoy may have figure things out before they had gotten so bad. Well that is my opinion of a direction you could take the story. I had started reading this when if first came out but had to reread it again just to refresh my memory and just to put it into words in case you may not have picked up on it but I love this story even though it has broken my heart along the way with Jim and his battles. Please to update very soon.
Date: 05/09/2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Mind's Depths
My heart aches every time I read a new chapter of your fic... damn it, now i have to wait like 3 months again!!!
haha. Not 3 months this time. I swear. Maybe a month at the max. I just started the new chapter already.