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Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is certainly an unusual first time... but it works :)

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Date: 04/14/2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful. Great job showing us Spock's thought during the whole thing. Lovely piece of work.

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Date: 09/10/2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Grammar Glamour Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is lovely! I particularly enjoyed Spock's reticence. I think a lot of pressure is put on tops to embody that role entirely, and acknowledging the uneasiness that can accompany it is really difficult.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your remarks.  My greatest concern was to faithfully show the complexity of emotions from the top's side, especially from the perspective of a novice top.

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