Date: 08/13/2010 4:29 AM Title: Fever
ohhhh holy hell ... *flails*
Date: 01/03/2010 4:29 AM Title: Fever
Oh, I like that ending; I didn't expect it. Spock is running some hot wild fantasies in his fever ? He probably didn't admit his feelings to himself until then... In any case the result is intense and very hot, your descriptions of physical sensations with short or chopped sentences and powerful words creating an impression of irrepressible urgency and passionate surrender to one's senses that is perfect for Pon farr. Excellent :).