Date: 04/04/2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved the subtlety in the story that Spock tells Jim. It took a second read for me to realize that you had avoided gender pronouns for the human. :D
Kidfics are always fun, and this one didn't disappoint. I think it would be interesting if you were to write more along these lines. I can't imagine Spock sitting idly by while Frank beats Jim, for example, so it would be interesting to see him try to put a stop to it in some non-violent way.
I'll have to do a sequel at some point :) Thanks so much for your feedback! And yeah, the subtlety was intentional. ;)
Date: 04/03/2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ugh. I want this fluff to continue!
I love kid!star trek stories, they are a amazing.
I wish you would make a second part or make it that they continue to grow older. You know like next chapter their 15 or something. It's just so sweet.
Your a great writer. :)
Thank you!!! *blush*