Reviews For Perpetual Motion
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Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Um ... talk about cutting to the chase and reducing things to their essentials ....

Reviewer: HaveYouHeard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never thought so few words would be so touching!!! Love this!

Author's Response:

I suddendly felt the 'essential' nature of their bond and out this came.  So glad you liked it.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now this is how poetry should be written!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that is very kind

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry, still waiting for understanding

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is ... wow. With just 17 words you've encapsulated their relationship, and I absolutely love it!

Author's Response: So thrilled you liked it, thanks MG

Reviewer: mazaher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, beautiful! so concise.

Yin being filled, Yang finding boundaries... (I'm sure at some point they will reverse polarities)

Thank you

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I'm writing something huge at the moment and I just felt like using as few words as possible...LOL

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