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Reviewer: nekoii-desu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Because this is the only other English piece you've written, ofcourse I had to read it :)

 Listened to the music while reading like you advised~ And yep... It sure gave a brand new feeling. the 3 part accompanied each other so well~ I'll never be able to hear Muse without thinking of this Exogenesis Symphony. Supermassiveblackhole can go down its hole. This comes on tops!

It felt eerie to imagine Spock singing to those angry parts of the song Cross Contamination in particular. It's akin to watching a horror show - a Vulcan loosing control. But Redemption did redeem him back. It's got the goosebumps feeling attached, trying to mentally hear a deeper voice saying those same words. *shivers* Phew....

The English ain't that bad. Some parts were phrased nicely than others. Sentence structure a bit creaky in bits. But overall, the message got through well, and I understood it all~ Keep practicing, you'll get better! :)

ps: there's a bit of funny code left behind at the top and bottom. ;)

10 ratings, for a neat job on literature with music accompaniment befitting the mood. (and for introducing this song *w* )

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

stunning and painful but it rings so true to the personalities :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Vixis-san! I'm so afraid that it doesn't works. I heard the Exogénesis Symphony and the idea flowed by itself over the keyboard. Thanks a lot, again, for your R & R. Namasté. FantasmaAlineal

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