Date: 07/21/2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
When I finish a story, I always, but always, without exception, leave a comment.
I noticed that there is no response - so I concluded that I read this story!
And while I come across:
/ / I don't want you to force yourself to stay with me if you can't remember the love. If you do not and feel the love / /.
I feel very very familiar.
And to obtain further strengthened my feeling:
"Help me learn how to love you in a way you can find ... acceptable now"
Can be posting the story at another site?
This story is also posted at my website, www.mazaher.org, where all my original and fanfic writings are collected. However, the answer is simple: you *did* comment on the series as a whole. Here are your review and my answer:
Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2011 5:33 PM Title: Two lives, two deaths
I do not think of you as a writer. I see you as an explorer
Passed many lives until you're done, do not doubt it.
You have arrived to the depths, and there was no desert that you did not interrogate
Your writing is so exposed. It stunned me
Yet retained a minor
See you at the next adventure
I may be wrong
but I feel like I know you
o friend whose conversation
flows into poetry.
Minor is what we all are
until the stories end and we
finally --finally-- see.
“Oh my”: death is no less an adventure
than all the rest