Date: 07/21/2012 8:20 PM Title: 1. Amanda
In terms of writing it was astonishing.
I'm astonished myself to be receiving comments after such a long time. It makes me proud that someone is browsing the archive and taking time to send me word. Thank you! =)
Date: 02/18/2011 5:47 AM Title: 3. Kirk
Poor Jim! This again was amazing and perfect.
It was a hard time, but things will be getting better, you'll see! Writing this series made me understand the inner workings of TOS Kirk. I found I got more and more fond of him the deeper I went.
Date: 02/18/2011 5:30 AM Title: 2. Spock
Another amazing chapter!
Thank you! I'm especially fond of this series, and although the seed was sown by raku with TLC, things got actually moving around the still image of Spock, feeling cold.
Date: 02/18/2011 2:12 AM Title: 1. Amanda
Wow. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. Amanda's POV was incredibly perfect.
The next day he insisted on changing the medication himself, alone in the bathroom.
I began to understand then.
He was no more than four.
This broke my heart!
There is a strain of just this sort of stubborn self-sufficiency in my mother's family. It is both heartbreaking and exhasperating... Like they must prove themselves to the universe. Amanda needs Vulcan-like self-control to prevent herself from smothering Spock with unwelcome human care, and limit herself to what he can accept (from her, or anybody).