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Reviewer: newaunty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I could not keep reading this because I couldn't cope with your punctuation errors. 

The word "your" as you are using it, is a contraction of the words "you" and "are", spelled "you're". The apostrophe replaces the letter "a". The word spelled "your" is a possessive pronoun, indicating ownership - ie, "this is your story, and you're doing a good job."

I'm sorry, but I found it so dislocating that I couldn't concentrate on the story.

Reviewer: HaveYouHeard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oooh Me likey! Think Jimmy could punish Spock a little more; push those Vulcan controls a little more =p Muaha! Loving this! Jim is SEX-EE. Thanks for this! Can't wait for next update

Reviewer: Zzickle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

If this story is unfinished, it should be in the Works in Progress category.

Reviewer: treehugger77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Spock, he can't catch a break!!
Another good chapter and I was happy discover that you had updated!
Can't wait for the next one! :)

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Mmm, yum, tasty part 2.

Fellow drummer: I grieve with thee

Greywolf, didn't know that band but damn, a drummer's a drummer--only another drummer can understand.  Got to say, JTK in da nuverse'd make a *kickass* drummer -- but he'd probably insist on playin' lead guitar anyway ;-)>

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Mmm-hmm, yumminess, very tasty.  I can see a few grammar etc. mistakes but they don't jar one out of the storyflow.  Moar pls!!



Author's Response:

the fact that you are even reviewing is just epic cause i love your work!!! so TYSM! *huggles via internets* and i hope you enjoy part 3! :D

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