Date: 03/20/2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I read this when you first posted it and was utterly disturbed at the same time as I was utterly enthralled. It took me a while to be able to read it again and review it. It's horrid and weird in so many ways, but there is no denying that it is genuinely good writing.
Date: 11/24/2009 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god. I genuinely had to create an account here just so I could review this.
Again I repeat: oh. my god. You are amazing. I was hardcore crying by the end of this and I can't remember the last story that actually made me do that. Absoultely fantastic. You took a really potentially really squick-y topic and just GAWD. Amazing. Look at that. I couldn't even write a complete sentence there.