Date: 04/06/2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your Kirk- I imagine that this is exactly how he would deal with his emotions and experiences on Tarsus IV when in a course that is trying to use Kudos in this manner. Your Spock is very believable in his actions and reactions when dealing with an uncommunicative Kirk after being pursued in this manner.
I almost want to see how this beginning would change how these two react once their both on the Enterprise- If you ever get a plot bunny to continue this. Thanks so much, you did a wonderful job of bringing these two characters to life.
Date: 03/23/2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is. Bittersweet Angst.
Ouch it's good! The flow went smoothly, with this languid-ness to it. Like when you're moping about and don't wanna get things done. It's like, feels like Jim, it's hard to feel the trauma he's going through on a personal level (unless you've lived through a massacre). But you definately feel for Jim.
Thank god it all cleared up. and Tom's blunt truth spewed out just like that ,felt like sinking yourself slowly into a hole cut out in the frozen pond.
Wrap it all up feeling warm, safe and protected. and we can sleep well tonight with just a bit dried tears felt in the eyes. ~
Date: 11/05/2009 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this was fantastic. No matter how much people mistake Spock for a cold, heartless bastard, he would never allow his Jim to hurt alone. This is going in my favorites, and you are being marked as a favorite author. Thank you for sharing your exceptional gift with us. My only regret is not being able to give you a rating above 10.