Date: 08/19/2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow what do you mean not explicit??? i deem this story cold shower worthy :P
i thought it was written very well and i saw not mistakes in spelling or grammar, well done :) hope you write lots more...
i think i'm gonna go take a cold shower now :P
Date: 10/14/2009 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was seriously yummy and hot and I loved it! I can't wait to see what you do with Ties if this was your first attempt at smut! Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go find some chocolate to satisfy a certain craving that just popped up...
Date: 10/09/2009 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
the only critique I have is that the ending seemed a bit "tacked on"...and it was far too short - loved it! :)
Thank you for your review! The ending was mostly because I wanted some way for Kirk to have planned the whole thing, and in a story that was done in Spock's POV that was the only way I could think of doing it. I'm glad you like it enough to think it was too short and I'll try to write longer smut in the future!
Date: 10/09/2009 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think I forgot how to write and think after reading this. OMG hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it (and might I suggest a nice chocolate lolly to cool down...just kidding!). Thank you also for the awesome compliment (your writing disconnect makes me very happy)!
Date: 10/09/2009 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
It certainly is enjoyable, and explicit enough! Very good mix of funny/erotic/tender, loved the bookstore scene.
Just a little thing: there's some sentences that look like you wrote them differently first, and then forgot to erase the "old" words.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it! Thank you also for the heads up about the words; I do that sometimes and I thought I had gotten all the old words, but I'll definatly check again, and I'm glad you liked the bookstore (that was actually one of my favourite parts to write).
Date: 10/09/2009 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
If that wasn't considered explicity smut, I can't wait to see what you think it should be. 8D -hint for more?- Very well written. The nearby convenience store should thank you once I go and clean out their chocolate section.
Thank you so much for your review and I'll see what I can do for future smut. As for the chocolate thing; thank you so much for the excellent compliment! This fic was such a no brainer for me because chocolate and K/S; totally things with me and so putting them together just seemed very yummy. I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 10/08/2009 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I.LOVE.YOu. THIS is youre first foray into smut? YOU HAVE A GIFT FOR PRON!!!! and i nearly pee'd at the end when you find out spockPRIME!! told him about the chocolate.
SERIOUSLY.PORN JUST DONT STOP WRITING IT.
Thank you for the review and the compliment! I do believe you are the first person to ever say to me that I have that particular gift and so I'm very glad you liked my humble little smut! And I'm so thrilled you liked the Spock Prime thing, because he is so totally a matchmaker who would completely tell new-Jim that!
Date: 10/08/2009 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes. This story was thorougly enjoyed! Thanks for the treat. (I'm strangely craving a chocolate lollipop now...hmm. Wonder why?) o.O
Thank you so much for the review! This prompt just called to me and by the time I was done writing it even I was craving one! I'm glad you enjoyed it!