Date: 02/25/2011 3:19 AM Title: Not in Love Song
Aw. This was such a lovely conclusion to this wonderful series of vignettes! I grinned so hard in the second one, where they were believed married and Jim ended up calling Spock pet names, and then now it turns out Spock also had a petname of sorts for Jim. Yes it,s his name but he uses it as an endearment that only he uses - isn't that the definition of a pet name? ;) And that it's his way to say I love you, and Jim knows and doesn't push him to say it it full, accepting him as he is.... again, awww. Spock's denial wouldn't fool a child - indeed, it looks like a lot of people saw his feelings, only HE didn't - but somehow it just seemed to add to the overall intensity of the piece. And of course, I loved how he fell for Jim's brilliant mind first, and how we could totally see the evolution of their relationship between them even with only this handful of snapshots, and how their fierce love leaped at us from the page. Wonderful job!
Date: 01/06/2010 8:36 PM Title: Not in Love Song
i thought id let you know that i enjoyed this very muchly indeed. thanks for writing. xx