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Reviewer: HaveYouHeard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written =D Not a flaw or even a blemish on this masterpiece! You captured Spock's innocence so wonderfully, and Jim's dominance is sooooo sexxxyyy!! Lol. Thanks for this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It is such an odd feeling to have these stories going out again and your kind review really made my day.  Thank you again.

Reviewer: Zzickle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

So is this completed or not? If it is not completed, it should be in the Works in Progress category.

Author's Response:

Yes, it's complete as it stands.

Reviewer: dyk0523 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

God this is so sweet and spock is so bottom i love this. I always found Spock's innocence (just because one is very knowledgeable doesn't mean one is stripped of one's innocence) and high-bearing morality+self-consciousness very endearing. You showed that aspect of Spock right in this story so very well. Almost hated Kirk in the middle for a sec. I'm glad he came around and let out his true feelings. It's so refreshing to see Spock openly and willingly led by Jim Kirk. Spock's actually older in canon, is he not? Glad to see things shook up a bit :D this is why i love AU!! Do you write mirrorverse by any chance? I think you would do a tremendous job in portraying it xD

P.S. Janice Rand you bitch!

Reviewer: rose taylor Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was AWESOME! Do you think you could maybe do a sequel?

Reviewer: highlyillogical Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cynthia, I've read all three of your stories on here and I must say I am so impressed with your writing and your handle of these characters that we all love. You capture their love and relationship so well that the reader comes away feeling it too. 

I loved your ...and a bottle of rum  story! That is such a gem of a story I can't even begin to talk about.  Just so damn good. period.

And  The Thin Flame....I loved that story so much! Getting to see more of Mirror Kirk was great....and when Spock transferred back, the way Kirk and Spock dealt with the recent events was so real and lovely.

I like this story too, but I'm finding it really difficult to believe that Kirk and Spock fell in love so fast. If I've noticed anything from joining the "Spirk" fandomness, it's that Spirk shippers say that Kirk and Spock have a such a powerful bond to eachother, and that is the foundation of their love.  It is their friendship, loyalty, trust, and love for eachother which naturally leads to physical love.  So here Kirk and Spock fall in love when they meet eachother is hard to believe since there is no basis for it.

Reviewer: trekkz24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

awww! *huggles spock*

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2009 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for this wonderful story...it was written so naturally that it felt so right.  I could picture them both in my mind...love can be so beautiful...and you conveyed it so well....i have tears in my eyes it was so sweet....can't people see it that they love each other....it's canon...

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