Date: 05/07/2010 9:47 AM Title: Emotions Outweigh Logic
I liked this and think it would benefit from a sequel in which Jim gets tested as to the depths of his devotion as well as to his acceptance of Spock's non-human genitals (and I don't know why the thought makes me laugh). But I think it's safe to say that Jim is thinking with his downstairs brain like 99 percent of the time so it would make sense to have Spock be even more vulnerable than he was in this fic now that his secret is out, and have him react to Jim's flirtiness with a wounded heart. And I must say I really liked Spock's vulnerability in this fic, while we're on the subject. There was a nice touch of angst to his inner thoughts and it made him all the more believable.