[Report This]Date: 11/08/2009 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I absolutely love this story...i read every chapter. I love there first time...it was perfect. When they started to kiss my face began to get beat read...so precious true love. The descriptions of what Spock went through, what he had to endure. You describe it so very well, i can see everything happening in my head clear as day. The looks between them, the smiles they give each other. Thank you so much for this story. I cannot wait for it to continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks :-) It's good that you can see it in your head - sometimes I wish I could see it more clearly... I'm trying to plot out the next chapter now :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2009 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm on pins and needles, waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
:-) Thanks. I'll have to get writing...
Date: 10/20/2009 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is AMAZING so far, but just a scientific fyi, if you're interested, Spock's haemoglobin is actually called "haemocyanin," not "cuproglobin." Haemocyanin actually exists in animals on the planet Earth. It uses copper as its basis instead of iron and gives blood a blue or green color. I love this story so far though, it has me hooked...I'm going to go read the rest of it now... <3!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you :-) I'm always interested in science. I knew that horseshoe crabs and the like had copper-based blood. I thought 'haemo' was iron, but of course iron is ferrous, etc... Thanks for giving me the proper name for copper based blood :-) I shall have to go through and change it, at least on my computer even if not on the net for now...
Date: 10/17/2009 1:01 AM Title: Prologue
Quite compelling, excellently executed. Gripping plot, well-written - important to me as an English instructor :-) Like the way you depict the Kirk/Spock relationship. Please keep on writing - looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
Thanks :-) I think I'm writing this one quite slowly - but I will keep writing - I want to know how it ends ;-)
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2009 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
*long satisfied sigh*
Thank you for updating! This is a wonderful story. The plot is engaging and original, the characterizations are spot-on, and the writing is expertly executed. It is a pleasure to partake of this beautiful fic!
(applauds)
Now if you will excuse me, I am compelled to re-read....
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it :-)
[Report This]Date: 09/23/2009 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
hi,
only one word: wow! your narration is wonderful and your story has a little bit of everything: suspense, action, love, drama....the perfect mix for an amazing story!
pls update soon, can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thanks :-) So glad you like it! I'm working on the next chapter, but it's one of those stories that's just going slowly, I'm afraid...
[Report This]Date: 09/22/2009 8:34 AM Title: Prologue
Absolutely, wholly, completely gorgeous. For the love of all that is holy, PLEASE continue with this fic.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm continuing, I promise - just slowly. They're currently enjoying a bubble bath together :-)