Date: 11/22/2019 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am not much into this story as I really dislike drunk people. There is nothing humorous about them, nothing cute or even "romantic" about them.....rather they are just pathetic and annoying. I find it especially irritating, when people write Kirk, Captain of the supposed Flag Starship and the CMO, McCoy, getting rip roaring drunk, while on board the ship....even if they are "off duty"....since at any moment, the ship can go to Rd Alert.
This East Fix, Undrunk shot fan fic writers have come up with, to allow for writing these types of scenes, really does not work...as over the long term....all the same bad effects on the Drinkers' Livers, Hearts, Brains, etc, will still happen....unless by 23rd Century organ transplants are like a dime a dozen.
The idea of McCoy falling in love with Spock....well, I am not a fan of Spock/McCoy Slash, just can not see any chemistry there. Also, Can not see a 3 Way that some people write either. Why not just toss in Scotty....make it a 4-way? I personally think that after Kirk, Spock and Scotty have way more in common than the Vulcan has with McCoy.
you write well, but again, sooner read a story that does not feature a drunk crew.
Date: 12/23/2009 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thought you had me with Bones falling in love with Spock after Deneva, and then I read the bit about the Jim loving the hurt look in Spock's eyes, and thought 'now, you've REALLY got me'. And then I read the inverse cube bit and I knew I was totally and utterly got by this story. Wow.