Date: 07/19/2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful story, wonderful and fantastic. I love it so much, and I was deeply impressed by the relationship between them. They are soul-mate, whereever they are. May I have the honor to translate it into Chinese? Thank you very much.
Date: 07/03/2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was reading this, thinking, "Okay, this is pretty good. Pretty interesting. Good writing." And then I got to the last few lines, and I was just like, "Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!" Adorable, sweet, cute, hot, etc. Nice work. <3
-Spirk-Sporked >: )
Date: 09/12/2009 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
A definite favourite. I love discovering writings about that feeling felt in the gut and the throat... hehe. Might be something to do with chakras, but the conception isn't as important as experiencing it. The implications of it are both surprising and already deeply known, at the same time.
Date: 09/12/2009 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh. Woah. That was intense and intensely beautiful. I wasn't quite prepared for all of it. I assumed, as I'm sure many people did, that Spock couldn't remember that they had been together, not that he would discover their mutual feelings at such a crossroads for them. It was a pleasant surprise, not just to be reunited, but united in a new and wonderful way. Your writing style is wonderful, and a pleasure to read. You have my kudos, definitely!
Date: 09/11/2009 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
OH! They start out so awkward and painful, anything but beautiful with each other, and it segues neatly and wonderfully into their discovery of each other, of their deep knowing. Love your description of the meld! Just gorgeous.