Date: 09/08/2009 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
In this story, there is an enjoyably slow build-up, as Kirk tries to puzzle the enigma that is Spock, first becoming friends after an intially rocky start, to his feeling like he was becoming almost obsessed until finally Spock explains what is happening. I enjoyed the fact that Kirk was feeling an empathic resonance of what Spock was going through, exihibiting similar symptoms and needing, as much as Spock, to achieve a resolution.
The characterisation and voices are well done and the story moves at a nice pace towards its conclusion, to what Jim describes as 'pon farr sex' and a bond.
A nicely done story and a great read.
Thank you for the wonderful feedback! It is so heartwarming to see such a detailed review, and I greatly appreciate your pointing out which parts of the story worked for you as a reader. I'm truly touched and honored that you enjoyed the story. :-)
Date: 09/04/2009 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
"pon farr sex was just plain awesome" poor TOS-spock, if he only knew!
hope to read more from you...
"...poor TOS-spock, if he only knew!..."
I'm sure 'Amok Time' would have been a different episode if he had, lol!
Thanks so much for the fabulous review. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story. :-)