[Report This]Date: 03/03/2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely perfect, but that ending line is one of the best endings I've come across in this fandom. I choked up. Loved it!
Date: 09/01/2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
One minute Sulu was undoubtedly feeling downright manly, the virus fueling a sense of invincibility as he toted his ‘little woman’ in hand, and the next he was crouched on the ground holding his male bits, sword all but forgotten, while every other male on the bridge was visibly shielding their own out of empathetic reflex.
Is it bad that I found this way too funny?
{Also, Maya Is very happy she followed you here from Livejournal.}
Date: 09/01/2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
One minute Sulu was undoubtedly feeling downright manly, the virus fueling a sense of invincibility as he toted his ‘little woman’ in hand, and the next he was crouched on the ground holding his male bits, sword all but forgotten, while every other male on the bridge was visibly shielding their own out of empathetic reflex.
Is it bad that I found this way too funny?
{Also, Maya Is very happy she followed you here from Livejournal.}
Date: 09/08/2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mu-sic-als! Hilarious! Poor Bones, he works so hard and then has to hear things that make him want to bleach his brain.
Date: 09/11/2009 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your reboot version of Naked Time :-D It was a good idea to start straight when Sulu walked on the bridge with his sword because it allowed you to shorten the story and go straight to the heart of the matter. Clever :). I love how scared Jim is of Uhura, it made me smile a lot, and I love how unsubtle Spock and Jim were at the end. And of course, the dedication to his "Vulcan stud of a first officer" was priceless. LOL. I'm glad that you adressed the issue of Spock being miraculously cured of the virus without a vaccine. That point was never explained in the original episode and it always annoyed me.
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2009 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
hi,
enjoyed your story very much...
hope to read more from you...
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm honored that you enjoyed the story. :-)
Date: 09/03/2009 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, this was fun! This bit:
The mission was doomed from the start. An outpost filled with dead scientists on a planet about to explode was really the first clue, and a pretty telling clue at that. There might as well have been a sign that stated ‘Some crazy shit went down here’…but to watch as his own crew started to prance around like it was double shot night at the Puss ‘N Boots gentlemen’s club was enough to start a headache.
LOL! I about pissed myself laughing... Damn. (Wipes eyes, holds aching ribs) Uncle! Enuff with the giggles already, I surrended!
Greywolf, still laffin'
Author's Response:
Thanks for the wonderful feedback! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed and immensely flattered that it made you laugh. I can't think of a better compliment. You've made my week! :-)