Date: 08/20/2009 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked that. It was a sweet new Jim angsty love thing which was in character. I hope you do write Spock's point of view for Madness, cause I love Spock (and Kirk too, but Spock's the bomb)!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and I love Spock too!
Date: 08/20/2009 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This needs a copy-edit; the errors are somewhat distracting. But I think you've done a lovely job giving this new Jim a voice, and this piece is very much in the best spirit of the new movie. The choice of tense would ordinarily have put me off, but you had me grabbed straight away so I stuck around, and I'm glad I did.
Thank you for your review. I have tried to edit it again and I can't see any errors, but if you still can I'd love to know so I can attempt to fix them. I'm glad you liked it and I totally understand the tense thing (it's the hardest part of writing for me).
Date: 08/18/2009 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH I care, I very much care, I just reread Madness and would love to see it from Spock's point of view :)
This was a great little fic too, I love how you write Jim's uncertainty and pain right up until you give him what he needs.
Thank you for this :)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this and Madness and I hope you'll like the new one.