Date: 01/11/2011 3:44 AM Title: Breakers
I wish there had been a little more buildup and a little more about their mutual feelings in this; they went straight for the sex and it didn't feel very meaningful, which spoilt the experience a little for me. I also wish there was more attention to the characterization, because as it was, that is was Kirk and Spock at all wasn't very relevant. But the second half had a little more emotion in it, and I appreciated the story more once I realized that this wasn't a one-off just for kicks, but they actually had at least some sort of relationship. So thank you for sharing with us and giving me the chance to read!
Date: 07/18/2010 7:58 PM Title: Breakers
How did I ever miss this piece of hot sexiness. Man...ahhhhhhhhhhh ...i think i am gonna pass out. Very, very good. Just the way they speak to each other...Damn it could be an episode.....Oh god i wish it was. Well, atleast I have your wonderful story and my imagination. Gonna go read more delicious stuff you have come up with. HOT DAMN...need a shower now.
I don't belive this ...no one commented. Not fair...well I am.....it is that good....