Cute^^

I wish there had been a little more buildup and a little more about their mutual feelings in this; they went straight for the sex and it didn't feel very meaningful, which spoilt the experience a little for me. I also wish there was more attention to the characterization, because as it was, that is was Kirk and Spock at all wasn't very relevant. But the second half had a little more emotion in it, and I appreciated the story more once I realized that this wasn't a one-off just for kicks, but they actually had at least some sort of relationship. So thank you for sharing with us and giving me the chance to read!