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Reviewer: Sige Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 7:51 AM Title: none

I admit that when I read Stonn and T'Pring would be punished, I expected something like downright character bashing where a gleeful author revels in making the two of them utterly miserable and/or executing them without attempting to see their side of things.

That's not what I got, though, and I'm quite relieved. Firstly, the punishment seems sound, not like something handed out by someone who only wants to make T'Pring as miserable as possible. secondly, you treated all characters with respect, and brought up a point that I've rarely seen in fics, namely what T'Pring might've thought of Spock's involvement with Leila. The audience knows all along that it's (mostly) due spores (if there was anything more, Spock would probably not have acted upon it anyway without being under influence), but what of T'Pring?

And thirdly: Happy ending for Kirk and Spock. Other words are unnecessary. :J

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it was one of those ideas once I started writing it flowed

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