Date: 06/16/2021 9:55 AM Title: Agony
I don't really have the words to express… I have read quite a few of your fanfics since I joined the K/S archive however this one is a perfect mix of characters characterization and emotion I'm usually not very sappy but this one had me needing a box of tissues quite a few times and I was so glad that you managed in that I happier note thank you very much and as much as a emotional roller coaster this one had me on because your writing skill is phenomenal you managed to work the emotion and the eroticism into the story awesome job without having one overshadow the other you highlight the beautiful side of the relationship between the characters and still managed to include a perfect amount of plot and adventure. I recently discovered that this archive will be shutting down soon and moving over to archive our own I've had an account over there for a while and I can only hope at some point I will be able to find more stories from you over there thank you for this most… I don't know entertaining seems highly understated but so does enjoyable just thank you for this piece of work
Date: 02/18/2021 3:38 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
Fantastic premise so far; I've been binging your works but never thought to leave a comment until now C:
I only recently got into Star Trek because of fic, and it is beyond lovely to me to be able to read some of the genre classics, in the pairing that MADE fanfiction what it is today. You're legendary !!!
Date: 11/03/2020 3:20 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
This is so much fun to read! I found this just recently and have read it thru 3 times in the last few weeks. It always takes me completely away from reality and our current world crisis!
you do the voices so well, I can clearly see and hear Kirk, Spock and McCoy. I really liked T'Solin too! The story has made me tear-up, be worried, smile and laugh! I love the combination of professionalism by our guys along with caring for each other.
Thank you for all the hard work in crafting this and sharing your story with us obsessed fans!
Date: 01/12/2020 6:38 PM Title: First Aid
This is so cute, I love it!
This really made me smile, thank you for making my day a little happier!
May I have your permission to translate this into Russian? Of course I will mention you as the author and link back to the original work.
Date: 11/18/2019 1:04 AM Title: Closer To You
Whoa, intense! Not sure I like the final scene....seems every writer, well almost all, wants to go for a Dominate Spock in the sex scenes. You had such a gentle, romantic, building up of their relationship going, with Kirk, especially in the Trelane Scene, being the Stronger One....then you abruptly flipped it just to fit the challenge....I think you could have had Spock present himself to Kirk, willing, but in a softer, inexperienced way and have allowed Kirk to woo Spock, draw out his Vulcan, then have them connect....with Spock's moment of Total Giving and in turn, receiving, be via his minmeld and the Bonding.
Date: 11/17/2019 2:30 AM Title: After the Fire
Question, after the Event when Spock overheard Kirk telling truth to McCoy, and is devastated, why did not Bones care enough to go to Spock while they were still on the ship and see how he was doing? I assume you are writing Original Trek? Bones and Spock were friends. I am disappointed in McCoy.
Ok, you write well, because, when Kirk tells Amanda, Spock, "Overreacted," .....before she gets to respond....I am yelling out.... "OVERREACTED!? Overreacted, Kirk?!" Lol!
even in the conversation Kirk has with Amanda....it is still, All About Him! His feelings, His Losses. His excusing himself for what he has done. There really is not, yet, any deep acknowledgement of Spock's Loss, hurt, feelings. In fact...is Kirk this shallow, this selfish, this incapable of really connecting with another?
ohhhhhh....great moment between Sarek and Spock! Great writing!
Date: 11/17/2019 2:28 AM Title: After the Fire
You are a good writer, I guess I just can not agree that Spock should have been casted into the villain role and Kirk the helpless victim role throughout most of the story. But I am assuming, as a Writer and a Trek fan, you like to hurt Kirk.
Date: 11/17/2019 1:08 AM Title: After the Fire
Soooooooo after everything to this point.....as the Writer, you managed to flip the story and make it Spock who becomes, yet again in the World of Trek fan Fiction, the Bad Guy. You make him do this long confession to Kirk about how terrible his Vulcan inner self became, after PonFar, how his baser instincts and pride took over, how he deliberately became the dominating partner, and on and on....basically to make "Poor Jim" the victim and to sanitize the fact that Kirk was having side romps. By the way, if they were still on board the Enterprise, how, when and where did Kirk manage to have all those Quickies...and with who? His crew?
Then, lo and behold, along comes Carol Marcus, and Spock Loses it one final time....and off he goes to Gol, abandoning poor Kirk.
for this Reader, very disappointing. Why could you not have just allowed Kirk's actions alone be the reason Spock was driven to Gol? Is it so impossible to think Readers could accept Kirk as the one at fault?
well, on with the story.