Date: 11/27/2015 5:56 AM Title: In The Chill of the Night
I really appreciate this post. Edgy and masculine it pulls together so well the idea that Vulcan has extricated Spock from him. It hits the idea Jim is tryo g to be angry with the Vilcan identity but his anger with Spock is still there.
Date: 04/07/2013 8:02 PM Title: In The Chill of the Night
Wow!! The title, the words, the image at the end. Brilliant. So this is what Gol has done to them both. Torn them apart...Well written my dear...
Gol haunts my nightmares. It is the epitomy of Hell for everyone it touches.
Date: 04/05/2013 10:35 PM Title: In The Chill of the Night
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it's better than the original by Amichai!
An pooooooor Jim!
What a killer last line, btw.
I've had the outline of the idea to use Amichai for awhile. I was going to use it as the basis for Jim's post-Gol suicide note but I decided not to 'go there' and have now closed the book on that fic, unbirthed.
Date: 02/12/2013 5:29 PM Title: Spock's Reply
Outstanding...love the art and the poem is so intense! Just so very, very intense...the passion...the maddening need for union, the need to prove to Jim that he is not alone and that Spock is with him...has always been and shall be always...
Very beautifully done!
Date: 02/04/2013 4:29 AM Title: Spock's Reply
Liked the poem.
The art not so much.
Hi. Both the words and the art are a direct reply and continuation of the images and words contained in Dahliaxat's 'Encased in Glass' - http://ksarchive.com/viewstory.php?sid=4189. xoxo
Date: 01/30/2013 4:45 AM Title: Spock's Reply
How does a candle know it is aflame when it is devoured by wildfire
How does a puddle know it is wet when it touches an ocean
As two we are yet one
Always touching, always touched
breaking and birthing
new stars in our wake
Date: 01/19/2013 8:16 PM Title: Spock's Reply
Such a beautiful image to match the poetry, which coincides with Encased in Glass. Yes, Spock is there with him, even though Jim may not completely feel his presence. They will always have this connection. Great job my friend.
Thank you, my friend. You inspire me. xoxo