[Report This]Date: 12/25/2018 3:29 AM Title: Disappear
Liked this for years. Just now have an acct and reviewing. Short and poignant.
Date: 09/21/2017 12:17 AM Title: Even In Death
Again with the "truly". Spock saying "truly"? Come on.
Didn't 'get' this Chapter. Left me blinking and saying, "Whut?" I thought we were in TOS world? WHUT?? Totally confused. It really didn't get the point across I'm afraid. It just left me going, WHUT??
Sorry!
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2017 12:11 AM Title: Even In Death
Good authentic Jim voice. Would have liked this to be longer?
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2017 12:10 AM Title: Even In Death
I mostly really like it! It's almost spot on for McCoy's authentic voice - but not quite - that's why I held back a star. McCoy's voice is a tricky one to get right but this was a really good stab at it. There were little bits i really loved, the "That was private" bit for instance. Really characterful. Not sure I can hear McCoy using the words "truly" and "merely" though.
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2017 12:02 AM Title: Even In Death
This is very well written. This may be the best thing you've written. Characterisation and internal voices are spot-on. The 'feel' is right and yea, it's good :)
Date: 08/28/2017 5:14 AM Title: The Change
Glad you added this chapter. I think "Beyond" deserves it!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2017 2:51 AM Title: The Change
Awww, Jim does need you, Spock!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2017 2:49 AM Title: Disappear
This is so wonderful. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2017 2:10 AM Title: Disappear
"Because now it was my eyes that never left his face... probably because I couldn't make out whatever the medical screen were reading" Le bollocks. There is no logical veracity in that which you write. If that were the cause it would be the Bones' face his eyes scrutinised for information, not the Spock's.
Je désespère. Mal. Tres mal.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2017 2:04 AM Title: Disappear
"Didn't he want to feel?" There, she is the evidence you do not understand a thing. The Kirk, he would never ask this as the answer she is obvious.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2017 2:00 AM Title: Disappear
I think you do not understand the Jim and Spock relationship at all.
Date: 06/09/2016 6:43 PM Title: Whisper
It seems a chapter is missing. I have always wondered how bones felt about that encounter when he realises Spock is not blind. Emotional reactions that bring the house down.......
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2015 12:23 AM Title: Disappear
I love it that Jim refuses to give up on Spock and their friendship. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2015 7:10 PM Title: Disappear
This was so wonderful. I love to read more.
Date: 08/02/2014 2:54 PM Title: Whisper
I hope this is going to continue! I like the way you showed first Kirk's perspective, then Spock's.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2014 3:46 AM Title: The Change
The way you're capturing Spock's emotions is just perfect.
Date: 08/02/2014 12:46 AM Title: The Change
There is no way I will not love a fic that tries to pin down that terrible moment when a whole load of unspoken and unacknowledged emotions spring to the surface and it is too late for more than a deep eyecontact, hands almost touching and unexpected tears dripping unto the floor.
Date: 08/01/2014 10:02 PM Title: The Change
Very powerful. Reading it is like feeling what Spock is feeling.
Date: 08/01/2014 10:02 PM Title: The Change
Are you going to write more of these? This is excellent.