Date: 09/27/2014 8:11 AM Title: Violated
So now I still see no mention of Kirk's shoulder wound and it's as if it never happened. I just wonder what was the point of having him shot if it was going to never be mentioned again. It would have made the last chapter way better if Spock and Nyota has to take care of Kirk who was burning w fever from infection in his wound. Perhaps I missed a section somewhere??
Date: 09/27/2014 8:07 AM Title: Violated
I feel after reading this chapter - that there is a chapter missing between this one and the last one because I was excited Kirk was injured when he was shot, Spock and Uhura seemed worried and stayed because he was wounded - yet now in this chapter there was barely - if any - mention of his injury. I was shocked to see chapter start with Nyota napping cz in character I felt she wld never nap before making sure Kirks shoulder was tended to.
Date: 10/16/2013 10:42 PM Title: Past Imperfect, Part I & II
Stunning, as usual. An emotionally satisfying chapter, this made me smile because of the happy ending and the constant love that these three have for each other. Once again, I aplaud your writing skill and original ideas.
Date: 09/24/2013 7:14 PM Title: Past Imperfect, Part I & II
Great update with a lot going on. Finally a workable plan with a reasonable chance for success. I wouldn't worry too much about Uhura - she's scary enough on her own, but now she's got her babies and her mates to fight for. Really enjoying this!
Date: 09/24/2013 6:09 PM Title: Past Imperfect, Part I & II
I was hooked from the first chapter. As always, your stories are shocking, gripping and addictive. I love the whole threesome idea. Please finish this story and keep writing!
Thank you! It's nice to know I have fans to appreciate my work. :) You guys are awesome! Seriously...don't know what I'd do without you!