Date: 09/19/2013 3:44 PM Title: Honestly Ok
I like the insight into Kirk's character. Also, interesting that I should read this now as a coworker went on at length about taking out his frustrations on a 55gal drum and messing his hands up last night.
Not sure why men aren't allowed to cry and mourn and stuff like that and instead have to "be strong" and act cold and turn their emotions into anger that they take out on innocent metal. But I didn't tell him that. His nephew is in a coma and not expected to make it.
Date: 06/07/2012 12:07 PM Title: Honestly Ok
Are you SURE this is a complete piece? It really feels like the start of something.
Date: 06/06/2012 6:15 AM Title: I'm With You
Sad and beautiful. You captured Jim's feelings beautifully and I had tears in my eyes when I finished it.
It's perfect as it stands, but as someone who always wishes for happy endings, I think it calls for a sequel.