Date: 09/29/2013 5:24 PM Title: Private Tutoring
Congratulations for this marvelous fic.
Is amazing, but of course with CMM as your beta, how could not.
I am pretty sure the sequel (wich is already writen, lucky me) must be amazing, but i need to take a deep breath because of the warning you write for it... This was funny and just..happy. Now, i can not read any angst... ;)
Date: 09/29/2013 3:49 PM Title: Private Tutoring
Jim hugs himself in sheer delight.
"Spock is jealous," he whispers to the universe.
"Spock wants me."
I TOTALLY SEE THIS COULD CONTINUE WITH: He kissed me, he hug me, he wants to be my boyfriend... All that with a singsong voice, pink cheeks, and a goofy smile. :)
Date: 09/29/2013 3:13 PM Title: Private Tutoring
"Cadet Kirk, I suggest you wear a similar blue to the one you are currently wearing. It will work in your favour as a powerful distraction."
Jajajjajajja! That must be ne of the most convoluted praises i have ever heard of! Jajajjajajjaajajaj! Bust of course, Jim loved it, and if a were him, obviously too! Spock is so hot!
Date: 09/29/2013 2:31 PM Title: Private Tutoring
Oh! I was hopping for gaila to tell him "the true" about the hole hand-touching. Guess will have to wait a little longer for that.
Of wait! But, maybe she did not tell him, but she might tell Uhura? Jijijijiji
Date: 09/29/2013 2:24 PM Title: Private Tutoring
Oh spock is so TOTALLY aware of what he is doing! And i believe, of jims feelings too. After all he is a touch telephath, right?
Anyway, is this Uhura gona be an idiot, or just a funny relieve? Hope the last one, altrough is always important for the plot, to add some obstacles to the forming relationship. Lets see -or read- what will happen next.
Date: 09/29/2013 2:12 PM Title: Private Tutoring
So what? Uhura stay behind -again- and watched them? Or maybe is just "women intuition"?
Does not matter! I am guessing Spock can read Jims thoughs, so he actually is aware of his not-so-studentish-thoughs? XD
Date: 09/29/2013 2:03 PM Title: Private Tutoring
Hello. I have reead various of your fics (do not think that i had review them...maybe... sorry), so i decide to check on this one because...you are really good. Of course, it wasa total hit!
A few comments:
"I dont own Star Trek... but I would like a cadet uniform" Yeah...me too. Especially if it comes with a Spock inside...or a Jim...or both! *-*
"By the time the man god has made it...." "The professor, who is now the centre of Kirk's whole fucking universe turns..."
XDDXDXDXDXDXDXD Perfect! So funny. I am just imagining Jims face! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
'Little Jimmy' aka LJ.... I AM THE ONE WHO IS GONA BLOW A FUSILE WITH ALL THIS PHRASES!!!
'I'm glowing. I'm fucking glowing! I never glow! And my eyes better not be sparkling! Like Twilight glowing? ;)
I SOOOO gona continue reading this fic! Next chapter!