Penname: HannahK [Contact] Real name: Hannah Kerela
Member Since: 07/30/2009
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The Inevitable by Syrus Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Captain James Kirk believed that the greatest challenges he'd face during his five year mission would be to learn diplomacy and to gain a solid friendship with his First Officer Mr. Spock. 

 

He had no idea that he'd face a challenge that would take a definite turn for the strange and so change the relationship he'd share with Spock forever.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27617 Read Count: 33176
[Report This] Published: 07/30/2009 Updated: 09/11/2009
Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 07/30/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You already know this, but I love the way you portrayed Kirk here - it's a nice portrayal of new!Kirk, that keeps the rough edges without making him out to be a total jerk. Tres magnifique!

Author's Response:

XDDDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/02/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, seeing as this *is* an away mission, it would appear that our heroes are utterly screwed. xD

Love Kirk's viewpoint description of Terilooth and L'Reg. "Yep, there's a guy there. Now let me tell you about this girl..."

'Tis 100% perfect.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you caught that, since I'm not sure a lot of others did!  hehe...I'm glad you liked it! XDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/02/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love. This. Chapter. Kirk's getting some captain-sized headaches, eh?

Also, love the description of girl!Spock, as always. Makes me feel as if (s)he is standing right in front of me.

 

Which is not a bad sight to imagine, even if I don't swing that way myself.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she did happen to be a very pretty Vulcan, haha.  And Kirk is getting the idea of what being Captain of the Enterprise actually does entail, so it's definitely a learning experience for him too. XDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/05/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I. Love. Bones.

That was perfect. Something akin to a young kid going - "JUST because I HAPPEN to find her attractive does not mean that I have a *huff* CRUSH."

Love it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love Bones too.  You can always count on him being cynical and sarcastic! XDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/05/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Talking Scene: Brilliant.
Walking Scene: roflmao.

"You're doing it all wrong." - Brilliant Kirk-style bluntness

“That’s almost it, just sway the hips a little less…you know, unless you don’t mind looking like you’re going down a catwalk.” - I bet Kirk wouldn't mind watching Spock go down a catwalk in a sexy little designer number. I bet he wouldn't mind that at all. This is such a Kirk thing to say that it almost hurts.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I could see Kirk just teasing Spock about all of these things, and when I was writing this scene, everything just came out, and it felt so right!  Kirk is such a tease sometimes and poor Spock has to be the butt of the joke sometimes.

 

And I so agree.  That was completely what was in Kirk's head when he said that! XDDDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/09/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Woo, possesive!Kirk ftw.

Love the way that Spock turns into the badass cold-hearted woman so easily. I can actually see him (her) as a bounty hunter, totally, except for the whole "respect for life" thing.

The chess game does not need to be reviewed. It is just made of pure win all on its own.



Author's Response:

I think Spock playing that character was totally awesome, cuz it's nice to see familiar characters being different sometimes, isn't it?  And making Spock a cold hearted bitch was really fun. XDDD

 

And Kirk and Spock playing chess is always win!  Somehow, when it's them, it just always turns out awesome! XDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/09/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

...That is all.

Ok, now, seriously. I love the way you set all of this up - it's so believable.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so!  And it simply took forever for them to kiss, isn't it?  XDDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/26/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG I've never seen pon farr seem so... CUTE.

Wonderful job, as always, love.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it! XDD <3

Slow Motion by irisbleufic Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A friend of mine asked me to write a slow, detailed kiss. And then I dreamed this. [STAND-ALONE]
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 539 Read Count: 1342
[Report This] Published: 08/05/2009 Updated: 08/05/2009
Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 08/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Slow Motion

Ho. Ly. Smokes.

That was intense. I had a knot in my stomach the entire time, and it's not often that a piece of fanfiction can do that to me.

You really have a way with words, that you can tug at the heart strings and make the reader BE Jim for the moment.



Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you liked it - and yes, it was rather the point! I was so struck by the viewpoint of the dream fragment I could remember - i.e. being Jim, as you said - that I thought, hmmm, can I reproduce it on paper, make the reader feel it, too?

Just Out of Grasp by Syrus, HannahK Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: James T. Kirk was a lot of things. A good friend, a shrewd commander, and someone with almost a stupid amount of courage. He thought that he knew exactly what and who he needed in his life, but all of that changed when he met the Enterprise crew, and more specifically, his First Officer, Commander Spock.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Romulan Commander, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27259 Read Count: 26974
[Report This] Published: 10/03/2009 Updated: 01/08/2010
Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 10/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, is it egotistical of me to say that I love this story? xD

Seriously, hun, I'm now under the impression that you could turn a second grader's plotline ideas into a literary classic. You're awesome. ^^

Yay lovers' angst!



Author's Response: Not at all! XDDD And thank you so much! I write for you and all the others that enjoy my works, so it makes me very happy to hear I'm succeeding at my goal! And yes...angst FTW! XDDDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 11/15/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was certainly a welcome bit of comedy within what would otherwise be an overwhelming amount of angst in this story, darling. This is just enough to keep the story from being depressing, without compromising the tone of the story.

And, of course, it was effing hilarious. Great job.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! That's exactly what I was going for with this chapter, so I'm glad to see that you agree! And it's just a lot of fun to put Kirk and the rest in situations like this, so I think I had just as great a time writing this as you did reading, hehe. 

 

More story up soon!

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 12/07/2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Okay, this is by far my favorite part of the story (but you already knew that). The way you describe Jim's thoughts and actions is wonderful, and it really portrays how bad he feels for all of this.

And, of course, Spock's so gentle and forgiving - the sap is an big bucket of emotion no matter what universe we put him in, eh? ^^

Can't wait for the next part~



Author's Response:

I know!! This part of the story is soooo sweet, because you get to see just how devoted Spock really is to Jim, having been through all of this and still loving him as deeply as ever.  And Jim finally learning his lesson and owning up to his mistakes was also good to show too, hehe.

 

More will be up really soon! XDD

Reviewer: HannahK Signed
Date: 12/28/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You know that I love you for this chapter, right, darling?

As always, upstanding job and absolutely adorable.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it!  I had a lot of fun writing this part XDDD