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Member Since: 03/28/2011
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Daughter of Discord by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

18 years ago, First Officer Spock encountered a Romulan commander in the course of a spy mission. Now his past is coming back to bite him and his bond mate, Admiral James T. Kirk


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40959 Read Count: 17524
[Report This] Published: 12/09/2010 Updated: 05/06/2012
Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/25/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Rolling Out the Green Carpet

Trust Spock to beat himself up over his shame and Jim's supposed embarrassment. Stuff happens, it's not like they're ready for Jerry Springer...yet...at least I hope not...

Shamrock220

Author's Response:

Now THERE'S an idea--a Jerry Springer-bot interviewing SPock and Zelania, lol.

What To Expect When You're Expecting--A Pointy-eared Baby by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary:

Now all done!!!!

For those of you who wanted a longer story, here you go. This will be on-going; I'll try to have a new chapter up every couple of days. For those of you who wanted me to do a pregnancy fic, here you go. And for those of you--like me--who are tired of Jim always being the one who gets knocked-up, this time Spock's the mama. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Spock's Baby Daddy
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97055 Read Count: 176266
[Report This] Published: 01/30/2011 Updated: 03/09/2011
Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 03/28/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Having My Baby

I have to admit, you got me with the sentient telepathic baby.  I almost flipped over my computer chair when I realized it was T'Lira talking in Jim's head.  You have so much talent, and so much imagination.  Thank you for bringing light to the lives of your readers.  If we slashers ran the world there would be no war, no lasting pain, sure there would be a bit of angst, the occassional misunderstanding, but mostly everyone would be head over heels in love and making babies.  Hmmm, sounds a bit like heaven to me. 



Author's Response:

I agree, except for the part about making babies; I'm not particularly maternal; I have cats, not kids.

Glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading the whole loooong thing.

Finger-Licking Good by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

McCoy has got to learn to quit asking questions when he doesn't want to hear the answer.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Fairly Funny Ficlets
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 302 Read Count: 2382
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2011 Updated: 02/16/2011
Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg, Crisco when you're frying right!

Bones will nevah learn to not ask, love his swift departure!

A Valentine's Birthday by CMM Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

I just read a Valentine's Day story where Spock Prime was alone. I felt so lousy about it that I had to crank this out.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1379 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2011 Updated: 02/16/2011
Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/27/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Every time I read this I cry. It's sad and wonderful... Of course Jim Prime would have gotten the first cupcake from chef. It stands to reason that Nu Jim would do the same...

Going to my corner now overcome with the wibble....

Accidentally in Love by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary:

DONE!!!!!

Since I did a pregnant Spock, it only seems fair that Jim get equal time. This is an answer to KrazieKat2009's Baby Maker challenge, which goes like this:

Summary: Features preggers!Kirk. I would like for Spock to still be in a relationship with Uhura at start of story. And Jim has secretly been in love with his First Officer for the past year. No one knows of his attraction to Spock, not even Bones. (Though he can be suspicious if you want). During a scout out on a once technologically advanced planet, Spock and Kirk stumble across an old, left behind piece of technology. The technology feeds off of emotional energy to create new life; it senses Jim's utmost desires to be with Spock, and so it activates and causes Jim to be impregnated, with Spock as his child's DNA "donor". Neither Jim or Spock are aware that Jim has been impregnated at first, but soon they become aware. Another side effect of the machine is that it causes the pregnant person to become more dependent on the one s/he has feelings for, so Jim's attraction magnifies, and it takes all he can not to let Spock find out. BONUS POINTS: If Spock, at first, wants nothing to do with the baby because he is with Uhura, but his paternal instincts start to kick in and his attraction to Kirk grows intensely. BONUS POINTS: If Uhura turns out to be mature in the end and wants Spock and Kirk to be together.SUPER BONUS POINTS: Spock becomes possessive over pregnant!Kirk, and finds his pregnant Captain sexually tempting, and gets aroused constantly when near Kirk. MEGA SUPER POINTS: There is eventual (lot of) pregnant sex, and Kirk is a "virgin" when it comes to men. TROPE: Bottom!Jim

Whew! I don't know if I can get all that into one story, but I'll do my best. I'll try to have a chapter up every day or two. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Baby Maker
Series: Answered Challenges, The DVAS
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107474 Read Count: 506090
[Report This] Published: 03/25/2011 Updated: 04/21/2011
Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 03/28/2011 Title: Chapter 9: All I Need is Someone to Love (and Tonight It's You)

Your personification of Jim Kirk is one of a truly wounded soul.  So certain that he's not worthy of experiencing love, yet being drawn to it like a moth to a flame.  His internal conflict if soul-wrenching.  Enter the ever logical Mr. Spock, who will allow his friend to suffer, or the child that he carries, and the undercurrent of uncertainity of his emotions.  (Of course Vulcans have emotions we all know that they just repress them, but they are there.)  The question is will Spock see his emotions for what they are, or will he decide that they are a weakness and pull away?  Spock is the embodiement of so many "manly" men, emotionally constipated, afraid to experience what is inside them. 

Nyota behaved at first as any woman would I believe, however her good nature and loving heart are starting to win out.  I believe she will end up being definately in the corner of our star crossed lovers.  She could even be the force that slaps some sense into dear Spockie.

I truly look forward to seeing how you reconcile these two.  I hope for a wedding onboard with Nyota as a witness, and with her being the children's godmother and Pike as their godfather.  As for the baby it would be wonderful for Jim and Spock to have twins a girl and a boy, then their family would be complete, both children would have a playmate and confidant their own age and they would not be overly spoiled by being the "only child" onboard.  Also I do not think that Jim would be happy with a single child and since a trip back to the alien temple may not be fesible this would cover the bases.

I would also like to say that I have enjoyed all of your other works, your "voice" as well as where to take these characters is a wonder to behold.  I look forward to reading much more of your work in the future.  Thank you for sharing your talents and your ideas with us. 

Sincerely,

Drew Anderson

Formerly Shamrock220 of Shamrock's Slash Library 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Your thoughtful and detailed review is much appreciated, and I am so pleased that you see Jim as I do. Yes, he's wounded by life, but he has a deep need to be connected to someone. And of course, Spock has his own wounds, and both of them hide their pain, afraid to let the other see it.

Twins seems to be the voerwhelming vote; I just have to figure out the medical logistics. Poor Jim; like it or not, he's in for it, lol. Thanks again.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 03/28/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: You Can't Always Get What You Want

Oh and I've got You Don't have to say you love me stuck in my head playing on a loop since reading this and watching the utube video.  Please help!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

New song titles with every chapter, so you can have more sad songs stuck in your head. Go play "Tonight It's You' by Cheap Trick.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2011 Title: Chapter 15: We are Family

Hot Damn!  Go T'Pau!   Loved IT! 

I just got this image!  T'Pau singing...

"We are family...I got all my children with me...

We are family....Come on Nogura F with me!



Author's Response:

Yep, that's the song. ROTFLMAO. Nogura's screwed. T'Pau is nobody to mess with.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: You Can't Always Get What You Want

Okay what triggered the Pon Farr?  This makes bonding a moot point now, oh well all's well that ends well.  It will end well won't it?  Spock's not going to be upset again is he?  Great Goddess of my mothers I hope not.



Author's Response:

Spock's been in too close a contact with someone he wants to bond with, but refuses to bond with. The imbalance and inner struggle kicked his hormones into overdrive. And yeah, he's going to be upset....but it will end well, jsut not for another dozen chapters or so. We still haven't figured out what kind of baby Jim's having.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/03/2011 Title: Chapter 16: You Give Me Fever

must fight the pain!!!!   Ohhh when will the relief come?  CMM withdrawals !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

It's ok, new chapter up later today. Breathe deeply. It iwll be worth the wait.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/03/2011 Title: Chapter 17: I'm Burning, I'm Burning, I'm Burning for You

sniff, sniff.... trust Jim to know just what to say.  "I have your immortality right here.  I won't leave you alone."  I'm also very glad that Spock didn't go cold when he came to his senses, and try to shut Jim out again. 

This was worth the wait, you my dear have made my day. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad my baby bird is full for the moment, lol. Yes, I thought that was a fairly touching line for Jim to deliver, and in many ways it's true. even if something would happen to Jim, Spock would have his baby (or babies, still thinking aobut that one). More to come, another chapter within the next hour or so.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/03/2011 Title: Chapter 18: Stand by Me

ohhhh no the hormones are kicking in...and Jim's jumping to conclusions.  Oh well Spockie will make it all betta!  Thanks for the double dose today.  withdrawls all gone now...



Author's Response:

Good; I would hate to be responsible for a breakdown, lol.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/04/2011 Title: Chapter 19: It's Miracle, and the Miracle is You

Spock in shock???!!!  OMG, twin girls.  James Kirk you're in trouble in about 15 years!  Thank you for the update, I'm eagerly awaiting the next, can't wait to see T'Pau and Sarek "welcome" Jim into the family.  Hopefully, between the three touch telepaths and the double bun in the oven and the empathic healer someone will be able to help Jim with his emotional problems.



Author's Response:

Oh, it gets worse. I'm not done playing with Jim's mind yet....

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/2011 Title: Chapter 20: You Are so Beautiful to Me

Awww, poor Spock.  This must really be a miracle to him, hopefully this revealation will help to make Jim see just his worth, and the babies will need both parents.  Maybe Seleck will reassure him as well, after all he IS Spock as well.  Maybe his Vulcan healer can jump start his empathy so he can "read" Spock of course a formal bond would allow that as well.  This is starting to twist me up.  Jim needs professional help I believe, he's been wounded by the storms he's been forced to weather thoughout his life.  A vulcan mind healer or even a good shrink might be called for.  Of course they're orbiting Vulcan, and maybe T'Pau would know someone who could possibly help her hurting child.  I believe that she would be moved by the strength that Jim has shown thought his life, and the pain that he has repressed, causing him to be diminished in the way that the truly gifted usually are, in confidence and self-worth.  (even if Vulcans supress emotions they still have them).  If she were to accidentally to read Jim, I believe what she would see might move her to shed a tear or two, and to take him under her wing.  Jim needs a "mother figure" without the history that he has with Wynonna, it's really a shame that Amanda has passed on because I believe that she would have been ideal.  She would have been able to give him the emotional support that he will need.  Of course Spock is his mother's son, hopefully he'll be able to reach down inside himself and find that part of him that he inherited from the Graysons and find himself equal to the task.

Again thank you for this story, your voices are spot on, and your plot while not overly complex takes your readers on a rollercoaster of emotions, from laughter to tears, and finally perhaps to even a bit of envy and hope.  Envy of the relationship between Spock and Jim, and hope that maybe just maybe out there somewhere there is someone of that caliber that they were made for, and who was made for them. 

I wait your next chapter eagerly.

Shamrock220♣♣♣   



Author's Response:

TYVM. Yes, the plot is not too complex, because I want to focus more on the relationship. However, there will ve more plot twists now that they're at New Vulcan. And yes, Jim's a bit of an emotional mess, but then, Spock is hardly the picture of mental health, either. And if they fall into each other's arms too easily, that pretty much ends the tale. They'll figure it out. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: You Can't Always Get What You Want

Here goes the miscommunication again, and the thoughtlessness on Jim's part.  He's so at ease with Spock Prime, of course Spockie is going to be jealous.  That and the protective instincts on top of it could be a recipie for disaster.  And why is Spock so worried about a Clan Gathering?  Is Sarek planning a shotgun wedding? 



Author's Response:

I hadn't considered a shotgun wedding, but now.....hmmmm. No, Spock is simply ill-at-ease with his Clan, always has been, because he's never been good enough, Vulcan enough. Sarek showed up with a human bride, and now Spock shows up with a male, human, pregnant partner. The traditionalists will not be pleased. And yes, Jim's being thoughtless. He doesn't mean to be, but as previously mentioned in the story, Selik was the first person to really love Jim for himself. Besides, miscommunication leads to hot make-up sex, which pleases many of my readers.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't Go Breaking my Heart

There we go, good boy Jimmy, use that empathy. 

If not a chapter on healing then at least a step in the right direction, now Jim knows it's not the children that Spock is in love with, it's him.  With that reassurance he's ready to commit.  Can't wait for the next...

 



Author's Response:

Yep, now they can face the rest of the problems together (and they'll need to. BIG problems coming).

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't Go Breaking my Heart

Oh and Selik's tears over the babies was so touching.  Tears over what might have been, but joy over what is to come.  Spock better watch out Selik's gonna adopt them all and be Grampy.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/07/2011 Title: Chapter 23: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

OMG!  You made Spock faint!  Jim's gonna be as big as a shuttlecraft after all!  Poor Jimmy, there really goes his girlish figure.  But triplets, Selik will be over the moon!



Author's Response:

I think Spock had reason to faint. Good thing he's rich; he's gonna have three babies to support.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: You Can't Always Get What You Want

One question, little boys usually are closer to mama, and we all know that little girls are daddy's princesses.  Who will Spock Jr. bond with closer, Jim who carried him or Spock?



Author's Response:

Are you kidding, lol? I'm only just now increasing their family by one third; I haven't had time to work out the dynamics yet; I'm too busy scraping Spock up from the floor, rotflmao. My guess is Spock Jr. (and I'm NOT going to call him that) will be the hellion of the trio, so he'll be cast in Jim's image. We'll see.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: You Can't Always Get What You Want

OMG!  They say that you pay for what you put your parent's though with your children.  There'ssss gonnnnaaaaa bee trouuubbbbllleeee! (To quote Tootie Ramsey)  (Sorry dated myself there).  One or more of the Terriffic Trio is gonna crash a flitter!  (or should that be Terrible Trio?)  I can't wait to read more. Next question?  Names???



Author's Response:

Still scraping Spock off the floor. Give me time, lol.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed
Date: 04/07/2011 Title: Chapter 24: Fat-Bottomed Girls (or Guys)

Omg, I'm bawling...baby Selik, cause Spock Prime help Spock find Jim.  OMG but you can jerk at the heart strings.  I did love the line, I'm not calling them 1, 2, and 3.  That was cute. 

I hate that Uhura is going through so much pain however.  I really hope that she and the healer end up T'hy'las or would that be T'hy'lai?  She deserves to be as happy as the boys, even though she had a vindictive episode she's still good at heart and she's special, after all Spock loved her, so she has to be.

Thank you for this story it's the highlight of my day.