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Agony by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary:

Now Done!!! Happy Ending here!!!!

This is in response to 'Make This Have a Happy Ending' by vicktblueeyez. The challenge goes like this:

Challenge: Make this sad prompt have a happy ending. (not my prompt, belongs to anon at the kink meme)

Difficulty: Very

Prompt: Kirk/character of anon's choice are in a relationship the whole crew knows about and accepts. Then, Kirk gets top!secret-super!classified orders from Starfleet basically forcing him to seduce a traitor/spy to get information for Starfleet. [OR Kirk's orders force him to gain trust from the traitor/spy, so Kirk is all friendly and the traitor/spy takes advantage of Kirk.] Kirk follows orders/is forced but he's horrified, disgusted, and seriously messed up mentally by the encounter. Instead of comforting him or trying to understand Kirk's side, his significant other dumps him for cheating and the crew blames/is nasty to Kirk, since they aren't privy to Starfleet’s orders. Much angst ensues!

Keyword: Redemption

I've seen many takes on this prompt, all seeming to end sad which is why I haven't read them. Sad as in a broken Kirk, a broken relationship and K/S not getting back together. Mostly because Spock never found out...or he did but it was too late (Kirk ended up with Bones). I find it interesting that so many think a happy ending cannot be done. Kirk didn't believe in no-win scenarios and he didn't settle for the impossible. Instead of thinking in the box, he not only thought outside of the box but reshaped it. Saying something couldn't be done made him want to do whatever it was, even more. Yet, many feel that this prompt can only end in one way, heartbreak and it can only be written if the characters were extremely ooc. I think that is BS. A good author can make one believe in anything. They can take something old, already done and reshape it. The challenge here is to reshape this prompt and for that, you have to have the Kirk mentality and be as equally stubborn.

Stuff I would like to see but not required:

-A groveling and tortured Spock. Tortured as in self loathing. Kirk being all "fuck u, you didn't trust me, abandoned me, don't talk to me" and Spock maybe falling to his knees crying? "I have wronged you t’hy’la in ways you/I cannot imagine. I'm so sorry." 

-Super awesome dramatic make up sex somewhere down the line is mandatory. Pretty please?

-Spock has to find out somehow. Kirk left and Spock is clearing the Captain's computer maybe? Kirk thinking his hacker skills is all that leaves the file there thinking it won't be found? Maybe Spock overhears a secret conversation from Starfleet officials? Maybe Spock and crew are on an away mission some angry person is all "I'll never forgive him for using me for information! I thought he loved me but he was only pretending to follow orders!" Spock, "What orders?" Angry person, "Oh you didn't know?"

-Big time angst. Things like K/S seeing each other from across the room. Accidental touching. Something with big time tension.

All is forgiven and it ends HAPPILY aka with Kirk/Spock together.

I hope this lets me work out some demons so I can go back to my happy stories. Here we go....


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Make this have a happy ending
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66520 Read Count: 124911
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2011 Updated: 08/11/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 07/18/2011 Title: Chapter 5: A Treaty Made, an Oath Broken

Yah Happy B Day to me..and to make it better there are updates in my inbox!

But you almost made me cry. Poor Jim!



Author's Response:

Well, a very happy birthday, and don't worry about Jim. Sooneer or later, it will get better.

Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 07/18/2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Poisoned Fruit of the Grapevine

Two in one day? Hey I actually had a good b Day after all... thanks!

Now I gotta go finish that cake...yum!

Mama Bear or Mama Sehlat by CMM Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

This is in answer to Starlight Scribe's Mother's Wrath challenge, which asks for a story in which Amanda tells off Winona Kirk big-time. For obvious reasons, I had to let Amanda survive Vulcan's destruction. For my own purposes, I recycled my invention from antoher story, the Vulcan auxiliary uterus...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Mothers Wrath
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2231 Read Count: 5086
[Report This] Published: 07/14/2011 Updated: 07/14/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 07/15/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YAHHHHA! Happy Day...I have been having a very bad week...this makes me feel a little better.

I love your work. The fact that you took on one of my prompts is even better.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, hope next week is better.

Guess Who's Coming to Vulcan? by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE!!!!

This is in response to Starlight Scribe's Family Meetings Challenge:

Summary:

Jim Leonard and Spock have a 3 way bond. And a child. On board the Enterprise they have made a happy life for themselves.

Until command assigns them the mission of transporting a Vulcan delegation to Earth. Spock has only ever written his mother for the past XX years but never got around the mentioning Marriage and a Family.

 Sarek? Amanda? Meet your grandchild and his other 2 fathers!

Since one of my other long pieces is wrapping up, I decided to start this one. Can't be lazy...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, McCoy, Saavik, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Family Meetings (NO MPreg)
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28556 Read Count: 30857
[Report This] Published: 07/27/2011 Updated: 08/22/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 08/01/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rolling Out the Red Carpet

Yah! More to read! I like they way this is going. Hope you can update soon

Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 08/04/2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Big Happy Family

Yay! You're my new favorite person. I love this so far and can't wait for more.

The Rabbied Plot Tribble is now a lovely tamed story!



Author's Response:

Well, not yet, but we're workig that direciton. Glad you're enjoying it.

Inevitable by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Now done!!!!

This is in response to Starlight Scribe's An Early Start challenge:

Summary:

An AU

Spock has been enrolled in the academy for *** when Pon Farr hits and 'something' calls to him out in the city. Following the call he finds a runaway James Kirk.

The Expected happens but instead one of them running off at dawn they stay together and build a life. I would like to see Mpreg with an at least remotely possible explanation!!

It is your choice if Jim joins fleet or not and how the story goes from there.

This will probably be pretty damned mature; be warned because that's all the warning I'm going to give. I haven't decided about the mpreg; please let me know if you think I should and if so, who gets knocked up? And away we go...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Challenges: An Early Start
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82207 Read Count: 205401
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2011 Updated: 12/19/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 08/30/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Cohabitation 101

You're the best I love this so far

Enterprise Triplets by CMM Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

This is in answer to the challenge, De-aged Times Three by Starlight Scribe

The Big 3 get de-aged

Yah I know again...here is the twist Sarek and/or Amanda are on board ship when it happens...

Spock wants mommy but Jim is hogging her attention

Sarek is getting tired of hearing "but why?" with a southern accent.

And has anyone seen what happened to Sarek's PADD?

"JIM PUT THAT DOWN!"

If you like Finding T'hy'la, you'll love this--more fluff than a starship shuttle bay full of cotton candy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, McCoy, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: DeAged times 3
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3656 Read Count: 4309
[Report This] Published: 08/26/2011 Updated: 08/26/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 08/30/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL that was Cute Thanx

 

Unbelievable. by TDazz Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: In response to StarlightScribe's challenge: Disfunctional is an understatment.

Jim's family has always been messed up but nobody else needs to know that..

So when (Winona/Sam/Both) show up on (ship/starbase/shoreleave) it's not exactly a good thing. Especially with Spock there to witness it.

Spock does not understand, for all their problems Spocks family loved him ESPECIALLY his mother. Can Spock and the crew fix this? Or is it better for Jim to keep his family as far away from him as possible?

End it anyway you want.

So, yeah, this was supposed to be a 'quick little one shot'. Someday I will learn to tell a story in under 10,000 words.

Heavily featuring Winona Kirk, with appearances by other people from Jim's past. Edit: changed rating. forgot it defaulted to NC-17
Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse
Challenges: Disfunctional is an understatment
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12224 Read Count: 3826
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2011 Updated: 10/16/2011
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 10/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this Tanks for writing. I think my favorite was Sam. Although I did want to slap Winona for a minute there but that's just...well...



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed

In This Broken City by Alice Noxious Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

AU. Teenage Jim and Spock live in a post-apocalyptic world where it becomes nessisary for them to team together in order to survive. But soon survival isnt the only reason they stay together. Please Rate and Review!


Categories: Fiction, Poetry, Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: ST:TOS Original Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7216 Read Count: 6147
[Report This] Published: 11/24/2011 Updated: 08/17/2012
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 11/30/2011 Title: In This Broken City

Love this. Love this love this!

Can't wait to see how you portray this Jim and Spock because they already seem diffrent somehow then cannon.

Will and Wisp by Hypatia Kosh Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Original Series: Answer to Starlightscribes Reunions and Apologies challenge. (Btw, apologies if this was supposed to be based on STXII, because it is so not.) Sarek comes on board the Enterprise with a new aide in his party whom everyone will recognize--even if it comes as a surprise to him. Tension ensues, secrets are revealed, etc.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Reunions and apologies
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1236 Read Count: 887
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2012 Updated: 01/24/2012
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 02/11/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1:

I like it so far Please keep it up.

Hiding in the Closet by Dahliaxat Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Jim and Spock knows that McCoy is on the hunt. They both find refuge in the ship's closet.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Chapel, McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6865 Read Count: 8822
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2012 Updated: 01/28/2013
Reviewer: StarlightScribe Signed
Date: 08/29/2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL I can't stop laughing! I know why you ended it there I would have done the same if I where you but now I can't wait for the next chapter just to find out their reaction when they find those two in a closet! LoL! I even have the conversation in my head.

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Bones: Damn IT JIM!

Christine: *Laughs until she can't breath*

Jim: Hiya Bones.

Spock: Doctor. Nurse Chaple.

Bones: ( To Christine) It aint FUNNY Damn it! 



Author's Response:

I was giggling writing it myself...damn, your ending sounds wonderful, and I could see it play out that way as well...I should be almost done ...sorry for dragging this story....but my muse helps me out a bit and vanishes...bad muse....anyways, thanks so much for reading...I appreciate it.



Author's Response:

I was giggling writing it myself...damn, your ending sounds wonderful, and I could see it play out that way as well...I should be almost done ...sorry for dragging this story....but my muse helps me out a bit and vanishes...bad muse....anyways, thanks so much for reading...I appreciate it.