Reviewer: mdevile Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
For science! (easily my favourite catchprhase ever XD)
I loved the little snippets -
Spock and T-Pring are disgutingly cute and logical, and Spock's fear of cooties was made me grin as I was reading it. The entire scene was a beautiful examination fo his childhood.
The Aunt Fanny exchange is also adorable, poor young Sprocket, His Vulcany dignity so thoroughly comprimised by an over zealous aunt (no wonder he chose the Vulcan way XD)
The rowdy rommate Riley bit was great fun, "I loooove you man." Indeed.
Uhura's bit was sad, I loved how you built up Spock's emotions and showed the incredible loss he felt in this section. The part with her longing for him after, when they've become friends again broke my heart.
The Chapel section made we laugh out loud, Spock avoiding sickbay because of the unrequited love of the nurse? Perfect XD
The build up into their realizations that they care for each other was funny, I especially love the part where Spock analyses the medical entries and criticized Bones unprofession entry stylings (Also, Bones breaking Kirk's nose for being an idiot is hilarious)
Jim's analysis of the Captain First Officer life expenctancy rang true and I love how in character you handled the sexytimes - Kirk logicing Spock into sex could have been so very cracky but you've made in tender and beautiful and sexy as hell.Spock's sexy voice is becoming my new kink.