Reviewer: CMM Signed
Chapter 4: Karma Can Be a Bitch (or a Blessing)
I'm enjoying this a great deal, but I have to admit that IF I were writing it, I would have waited a little longer before Jim and Sarek 'got busy' so to speak. It does seem like they're rushing it just a bit, given Jim's heartbreak over Spock and the fact that he's pregnant with Sarek's grandchild. However, it's your story, and the joy of that is that you can move at whatever pace suits you. it's still lots of fun.Author's Response:
Thank you. I admit it is going a bit fast but you're right, going at the pace you want is a joy of writing. I was thrilled to death to see your review since the first story I read on this site was one of yours. The challenge from Jemma and A Different Path inspired me to take a chance and write this.