Penname: Plutobaby494 [Contact] Real name: Jessica
Member Since: 05/29/2009
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Sacrifice by Raythe Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Set soon after the end of 2009 Abrams’ movie. A new home for the Vulcan people has been found, but it is a planet owned by the Cerberus Corporation, a shadowy organization run by a man, Damascus Raine, whose advances James T. Kirk rejected when only a teen. In order for the Vulcans to get their new planet, Kirk must give himself to Raine. Will Spock allow Kirk to make such a sacrifice?


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Chan or underage sexuality, Dominance/submission, Explicit violence, Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34082 Read Count: 32632
[Report This] Published: 05/26/2009 Updated: 12/16/2009
Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 05/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Noticing

Wow this is really good, I was hooked the minute I started reading! And I love possesive Spock! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 05/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Noticing

Wow this is really good, I was hooked the minute I started reading! And I love possesive Spock! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: Thank you! Possessive!Spock seems to be a hit. I was always drawn to the tightly controlled nature he has, which always hinted at a highly emotional core: combine the two together and you've got quite a package. Thanks again and I hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 06/06/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is getting intense but o so very good! I like how your switching Pov's. First McCoy then Spock's. Are you going to do Jim's next? I am really curious to know what else Raines had young Jim do. It sounds naughty! Will Spock want to kill this man after he hears this? And is Spock Prime going to be at the meeting? I wonder what his reaction will be? Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I am working furiously on Chapter 4. That will still be in Spock's POV. It will switch to Kirk's POV in the next couple chapters then I will rotate back. Spock will not want anything to do with Raines after he hears everything and will do his level best to convince his people of that, but ... well, you'll have to read and see. Spock Prime will be at the meeting. His reaction to everything will be telling. I hope to have the next chapter out soon. Thank you so much for the support!

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 06/09/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Heavy Price Paid

I love Spock even more (if that's possible) after his little possesive claim on Jim in the elevator! Does Jim even notice that Spock is always touching him in this chapter? It's so cute that Spock dosn't want to let him go, not even for a moment! McCoy's awesome in ths chapter (athough he's always awesome but particularly in this chapter!)! I admire his loyalty and the fact that he actually cares about Jim! Raines is a sly blastard! Poor Jim! What cruel things he must have indured at the hands of that psycho! This story is amazing! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the substantive feedback! About Jim noticing the touching: he is going to think about it and wonder what it means (and probably gets it wrong; no one is so blind as one who will not see!). Spock's possessiveness is going to grow and he'll have to confront it. Bones is also a favorite of mine. He's so sweet and funny and crusty. His neuroses make him incredibly fun to write. We'll learn much more about Raines and Jim's past. Thank you again!

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 06/17/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Normal Between Them

OMG!! Spock was so hott in this chapter! I think he should have just forgottten the dinner and took Jim right there an now! It would have been even funnier if Bones had walked in on them! I liked this chapter. There so cute together, especially when they are confessing their undying love for on another. I think Spock shold give Raines what he deserves and beat the crap out of him!! McCoy would obviously been in the background egging him on!! When I saw you updated I was literally jumping up and down in my chair in excitement! So sad that it had to end! Please update soon. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for such an awesome review! Whew, I feel breathless just reading it. Spock almost did as you suggested and Bones would have been covering his eyes and groaning. There's going to be a lot of tension between Spock and Raines not to mention Uhura showing up next chapter. Thank you again for letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 06/26/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

NO Jim, have more faith in Spock. He's probably just acting civil and secretly wants to drag you off to the nearest closet and then bash Raines face in! Uhura gives up to easily, she's so set on someone who obviously dosn't love her anymore and is already thinking that she's defeated by the Vulcan chick! This was really good, please update soon! It made my disasterous day so much better when I came home and saw you updated!



Author's Response: Thank you so very much! And you got it perfectly! I'm thrilled that all came across. Glad I could brighten your day. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 01/26/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I thought I had reviewed this chapter but I guess not. Oops... Well, better late then never! I liked this chapter, though I can't wait to see some lovin' from the two boys. I thought it was ironic that Sarek was obvious when he was pissed that T'Sai wasn't there to get together with Spock, since he's Vulcan and all. I hope they get to Jim before Raines does. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

The Chase by ED of Oblivion Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

When Pon Farr strikes, Kirk uses it to his advantage and leads Spock on a wild chase throughout the Enterprise.  An unimpressed McCoy is caught in the middle of it all.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6446 Read Count: 6253
[Report This] Published: 01/26/2010 Updated: 01/26/2010
Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 01/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Chase

I love this story for many reasons. First, posessive Spock and the scene with McCoy. And then the sex scene... it was so hot!! And I loved the way you wrote this. How you couldn't see them through some of the story but always knew what was going on because McCoy was hearing it through his communicator. Another thing, great characterization. You got all of them spot on. Genius. Also one of my favorite parts was when Checkov was telling him that Spock was clawing the turbolift trying to get after Jim, I laughed when I pictured that in my head. A good laugh, not like I was mocking you but thought it was so absolutely brillant that I had to ponder the amusing qualities of it. I love the dialogue as well and the sarcasm that Jim used. Especially the part where he was telling Spock how he broke McCoy's door. Brillant. Keep up the amazing work!

Pride and Prejudice by verizonhorizon Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Vivacious Jim is fascinated and repelled by the arrogant Mr. Spock, whose condescending airs and acrid tongue have alienated Jim’s entire family. The romantic clash of these two opinionated young people occurs on an Earth long-settled by Vulcans, whose elite, logic-minded race comprises the top of the social hierarchy. Jim and Spock find themselves in a spirited courtship that challenges their beliefs about themselves and the world they live in. [STXI AU of Jane Austen’s classic, Pride and Prejudice]


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13189 Read Count: 6003
[Report This] Published: 04/15/2010 Updated: 04/15/2010
Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 04/15/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is very intresting. You did a fantastic job at mixing Star Trek characters into Jane Austen's world. I'm very curious to know who your going to cast the rest of the characters. And bravo at capturing the archaic english writing style, its not an easy feat. I can't help but notice that you mixed some of the conversations up (like the fact that the conversation that was supposed to happen at the meet&greet ball in P&P didn't happen unitl the second time they got together in your story) adding quirks to Jim's character that Elizabeth didn't have and the same goes for Spock and Mr. Darcy. You'v also went into a lot of backstory, creatively mixing both fandoms once again. Quick question, though. In your story, is two men dating acceptable in Vulcan society?

Please continue, I'd really like to see how far you take this. Oh, and just fyi. There were a couple times in this last chapter, where you you used Mr. Darcy where you were supposed to use Mr. Spock. I'm not sure if that was intentional but just in case you didn't know.

 



Author's Response:

It's an AU, so I should warn upfront that I'm not following what happens in either the novel or the two movies exactly. I hope a few things turn out to be surprise twists! So, if you try to conceptualize the characters as exact copies of the iconic ones, you'll be disappointed; for me, the joy in recreating the work is taking it in different directions. The farther the plot extends, the farther away from the original we're bound to get, espeically the ending, which doesn't have enough of a modern Star Trek sensibility to inspire me to copy it. I hope you're intrigued enough to continue reading along. And I picture their societies as quite merged, just that the Vulcans are more upperclass and most humnas tend to be lowerclass. And yes, gender roles are completley mixed up, because in this story, while many things matter for social standing, gender just isn't one of those things. Why? Because I just love playing in a world with more gender equality than the present one.

All Along: Fortune by Rimilea Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 

Ten year old abused Jim sees a home and family in Spock Prime, who has come through the black hole early without Nero's knowledge. Can Jim escape his abuse and convince everyone that he and Spock are meant to be together? Thanks to Peachly, my beta!

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: All Along
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58073 Read Count: 54761
[Report This] Published: 06/21/2010 Updated: 02/07/2011
Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 06/22/2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Contact

This is really interesting. Please update soon, I'd like to see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Never mind about that e-mail I sent you. It finally appeared! :D :D Thanks anyway!

Glass Slippers Are Illogical by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 99]
Summary:

Now done!

One of my readers (WiseDraco) asked for a K/S retelling of the Cinderella story, and since everything else I'm writing right now is PISSING ME OFF, I'm taking him/her up on the suggestion. This won't be a terribly long story, probably only three-four chapters.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Original Character(s), Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18073 Read Count: 29478
[Report This] Published: 05/22/2012 Updated: 07/17/2012
Reviewer: Plutobaby494 Signed
Date: 07/17/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Happily Ever After is Logical

I love this story! Its so cute and very detailed even though it is an AU. I love the concept of fairygodfather!spock roaming the universe searching for his Jim. It would make such a good storyline. My favorite line was in the last chapter, how there are thousands of Jim Kirks and just as many spocks that belong to him. That made my heart burst in happiness.

As always, I can't wait to see what your incredible mind comes up with next!!