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Finding Spock- Part 1 by CarminaVulcana Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 174] New!
Summary:

Spock is as Vulcan as they come. Or not. Struggling with isolation, his natural emotions and his need to be a true Vulcan, he somehow builds a life at Starfleet Academy. Follow his life from his childhood to his spiritual homecoming on the Enterprise. See him find his lost self in this story.

This story is basically Kirk/Spock friendship which can be interpreted as pre-slash. They will share a bond unlike any other. It may eventually develop into slash as well. However, there is no Jim Kirk in the first part. Since we begin with Spock’s childhood and academy days, there is lots of Sarek, Amanda, and Captain Pike. Jim Kirk will make an appearance in the second story which you can read as it is being written. The first chapter for that will be up soon. It isn’t strictly important to read the first one to understand the second one but it is highly, highly recommended.

I do not own Star Trek or any of its characters. The OCs are all mine, though. 

Feel free to comment and engage with the work. I'd love to hear from you about what you think of the story. Enjoy !

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Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Challenges: A halfbreed freak right? (Wrong)
Series: Finding Spock
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199244 Read Count: 22096
[Report This] Published: 02/20/2017 Updated: 11/06/2017
Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 05/23/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very concerned about what is going to happen....I wish it would end up positive but somehow I think things go south for Spock and his little happiness.😟



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Spock's life has been just too difficult all these years. At this point, I can't say much/ But I assure you, he will find his happiness. Thank you for reading my story :)

Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 06/11/2017 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

This is heartbreaking but so well written! I just hope Spock doesn't have to go through more pain. It's been enough for a lifetime already. May he find peace and trust soon again.

Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 06/21/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think Puri must give the shawl to Spock, but only when his mental condition has improved. Just in case Spock has to leave the ship now, for some reason, then Puri must give it to him now. It's like the  T'Amun's last kissfor Spock, and it belongs to him.

Not sure about Pike and his lost in faith in Spock...I'm sure he wants to support/understand him, but he does have to think as The Captain, who is responsible for the upcoming missions as well as for safety of the crew. There is a chance that Spock develops into a "loose gun", due to his tremendous losses and pains, so...Pike must make a command decision, which is rarely comforting.

Author's Response:

You are right. Pike is certainly not comfortable with all these doubts he's having. But as one reviewer pointed it, it might be because Pike doesn't realize that Spock is not human. He is half Vulcan. And hence, his experience of trauma is different. But yes, what Spock has gone through is too much even for him. He could totally turn into a loose cannon. Let's see what happens. I am still working on the next chapter and trying to answer these questions in my own mind. Thank you so much for leaving me a review. It means a lot to me. 

Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 08/08/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I still hope for a "change of plans" and maybe a return of Sarek for the diplomatic mission. I so wish father and son would come closer again. Great chapter, and as always: Great cliffhanger😀. Aside from this, I wish you all the best and a speedy recovery....maybe you can try a healing trance!!

Still, Like Dust by Sita Z Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Vulcans have been enslaved on Earth for more than fifty years. To Jim Kirk, 14, this is just one more chapter from his history book… until his uncle brings home a Vulcan boy to help on the farm.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock, Slave fic
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51520 Read Count: 9168
[Report This] Published: 04/02/2017 Updated: 05/24/2017
Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 05/19/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story brought me finally to register with this site. I've been browsing the stories here for some time, but this is a unique plot, and I always look forward to read more! I'm still scratching my head why the Vulcans seem to be so helpless and submissive though. However, I love this story, even the heartbreaking road Jim and Spock were taking, and hope Spock gets to meet family member(s) soon. Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review! I understand what you mean, submissiveness isn't really a Vulcan character trait. So far, many of the enslaved Vulcans in this story were children or teenagers like Spock, who don't really have the resources or the agency to defend themselves. The new chapter will introduce some adult Vulcans who take a more active role in the underground movement and work towards helping others. Hopefully, this will provide a more rounded picture.

I'm very happy to know that you're enjoying the story!

Invisible by CarminaVulcana Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43] New!
Summary:

Spock is held captive in a Cardassian facility and tortured for information. The only way he bears it is with the knowledge that at least Jim is safe. Unknown to him, they are forcing Jim to watch everything they do to his first officer.

This is going to be a multi-chapter fic. And it will be dealing with very dark themes. Darker than Finding Spock. Please heed the warnings if you are easily triggered.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28245 Read Count: 3604
[Report This] Published: 08/25/2017 Updated: 11/14/2017
Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 08/28/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This should absolutely be Adult rated.

Reviewer: Jadzia Signed
Date: 11/05/2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What I like about this chapter is that it shows the ongoing struggle with Spock's health. He is not Superman, or the undestroyable Vulcan who can pull off the healing trance anytime and get well within hours. This is more reality although hard to read. Looking forward to his recovery of course!!