Penname: nicecuppacha [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 09/13/2013
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24 year old wannabe writer who has been searching for her muse and has finally found it here. Dabbling with my first story. Hope you all enjoy.

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The Revenant by cowgirl dressage Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]

The Revenant: one that returns after death or a long absence.


Many thanks to Spock 2U for the title page.  What a lovely picture!


This story is dedicated to Alice Nox, whose story, Broken City; I couldn’t get out of my mind, even a year later!


Jim Kirk had all but forgotten Tarsus IV and then his nightmares began, estranging Spock and everyone he holds dear.  Are the nightmares merely flashbacks or is there something more sinister?  This story is a metaphor for alienation, loss, and fear.  Originally, the challenge was to make something interesting of the episode, Spock’s Brain.  Well, it clawed its way into something else.


Warnings for non-con, underage and rape.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17483 Read Count: 7064
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2013 Updated: 10/17/2013
Reviewer: nicecuppacha Signed
Date: 09/26/2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wow. This story is amazing. I love how it feels very multidimensional (is that the right word? I'm not feeling very expressive this morning!). The Angel reminds me of Mrs Coulter in Philip Pullman's His Dark Materials. The way that Jim is sorting out his trauma in his subconscious via zombie apocalypse is awesome and I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Spock! Keep up the good work. Sorry this comment isn't very coherant lol Thank you for this! :)

Author's Response:

I thought your comment was very coherent!  The format can be a bit confusing, I've had a few reviews on AO3 where the readers couldn't figure out the shifts back and forth between the scenes.  I am thrilled you are following this and we are a couple of chapters away from a resolution.  Thank you!