Penname: plaktow [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/28/2013
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A humble request: if you read my stories, please spend a few seconds to rate it. All comments are also welcome. English isn't my native language, so apologies for all the silly mistakes in my stories.


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That Much by Vulcan Lover Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Jim is drunk, but not enough to stop him being up for getting it up with Spock at last. Spock is the reason 'it's' up, more often that not, even if Jim has a legendary history of bedding women -probably because some neanderthal once told him he'd never have a hope of managing it, being so gay....


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1223 Read Count: 1327
[Report This] Published: 02/02/2015 Updated: 02/02/2015
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/06/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story! The beginning was very well written and characterised as well. In the second half, however, I was a bit bothered by the extensive use of commas. It made the sentences seem broken and difficult to read. Also I'd tone down the exclamation marks especially with Spock, although I understand why he might lose his control in that situation ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for everything! You're likely more than right, but grammar has never been my strong point, and there are so many different 'schools of thought' about it, depending on who and when - that I fully admit I'm naff at it! Thanks for the kind words though...