Penname: plaktow [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/28/2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

A humble request: if you read my stories, please spend a few seconds to rate it. All comments are also welcome. English isn't my native language, so apologies for all the silly mistakes in my stories.


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Beauty by Vulcan Lover Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Answering a Challenge by Fugitive

 

 Asking for Beauty to be yours...

 

(Just corrected something AND aded a line, after reading through YET AGAIN!!)


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Beauty
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 396 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2013 Updated: 11/02/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an interesting piece of free-verse poetry.To me it seems a bit unfinished, which is probably due to your style of not using full stops or paragraphs. It's just a style thing anyway, so not important :) The ending was very nice and surprising, and leaves the reader hoping that one day the door will open...



Author's Response:

Thanks. I suppose I didn't bother with punctuation for 2 reasons; I get it wrong (!) and because it's meant to make a person think (the poem!) - Thanks for the compliments!

Mistletoe Kisses by 1lostone Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Spock catches Jim under the mistletoe


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4053 Read Count: 4384
[Report This] Published: 12/07/2013 Updated: 12/07/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A most excellent story, well written and the characters were portrayed very nicely, too! Good job :)

We Learn By Doing by lah_mrh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

As he and Kirk embark upon a sexual relationship post-V'Ger, Spock worries that his lack of previous experience will lead to disappointment for his lover. Lucky for him, Kirk is an excellent teacher.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2743 Read Count: 2701
[Report This] Published: 12/08/2013 Updated: 12/08/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Purrs happily*

That's about the only comment I can make right now... *purrrr*



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. :)

All You Need and More by Servatia83 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

One shot, PWP, if you will.

If you will not, it's a part of Earth, but there is absolutely no need to read Earth to understand this. So yeah.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: The Elements
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2190 Read Count: 2308
[Report This] Published: 12/10/2013 Updated: 12/10/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow... Hot and steamy, yet intimate and sweet. For some reason the "Lie back down, Jim" made me just squeel with delight!

I very much enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing it :)



Author's Response:

I thank you for the kind review!

Intoxication by Wingstar102 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A quiet evening of holiday celebration turns into so much more...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Fluff, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1447 Read Count: 1991
[Report This] Published: 12/13/2013 Updated: 12/13/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/14/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intoxication

Squee! <3 Absolutely delicious, hot as hell while cute at the same time. I loved your description of the room with the ethereal atmosphere, and how the lights painted their bodies with various colors!

The beginning was kind of mean though, made me almost skip over the following "boring" parts about sitting on a couch :D



Author's Response:

Sorry about the boring parts, but I'm pleased you enjoyed it regardless. Thanks for the review!

Summary:

For the 2013 Kirk/Spock Advent. I'm so sorry.

Considering there's a reference to thighs, I'm going to say it's probably a bit more TOS-verse, but should really read either way. Kirk in any universe really just has da booty, gotta say. :) 

(hiding away now)

 

Thank you to CountryDoctor for the error check, but I've changed it a bit since then and all remaning errors are my own. :) 


Categories: Filks and Songs
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 12/17/2013 Updated: 12/17/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 12/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hehe, how sweet and sexy at the same time! I'm sure Jim makes Spock's christmas bells ring ;)

Author's Response:

Ha ha ha. I'm sure. Thanks. :)

Christmas Spirits by CatalenaMara Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

On the night before the big holiday celebration on the Enterprise, Spock is visited in his dreams by three people.  Any resemblance to “A Christmas Carol” is strictly intentional.

Title and story concept by Danielle Stewart. 

This story is part of K/S Advent 2013.

http://ksadvent.livejournal.com/


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4485 Read Count: 1684
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2013 Updated: 12/25/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You write very well, and the characters were just right! I could practically see all this happening.

You balance extremely well between descriptions, dialogue and action. The story flows forward effortlessly, so it's easy to read. I was a bit baffled that Spock dreams (Vulcans usually don't, I think), but somehow it feels natural here. All in all: excellent work! Thank you :)

From a Distance by Bedwench Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Spock has been sent on a diplomatic assignment that takes him away from the Enterprise and his lover. Always keen to develop his knowledge and skill in any field of endeavour Spock finds an opportunity to add a new string to his bow And to find an innovative way to keep his Captain very very happy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3555 Read Count: 1555
[Report This] Published: 01/01/2014 Updated: 01/01/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/02/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

The idea of the story was very good. I also liked how you described Spock's motivations: he wouldn't come up with "comm sex" (I guess it can be called that) himself, nor wanted it only for his own pleasure. And still you allowed Spock to maintain his composure, while Jim got to be the show-off he is. Well done!

As for the style of writing... some sentences were really long, and could use punctuation. In other cases a comma could be replaced with a full stop. Some post-processing might be advisable before publishing. It refines the story, and shows you respect your readers.

Thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

Wow, glad you liked the concept and the story. I usually have a fantastic beta who removes commas and puts in stops and all that Jazz. Unfortunately she is not up to the task at present. I will do a bit of post processing later! I am glad you left such a helpful review. 

The Walls Between Us by museaway Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

They have been imprisoned for thirteen hours, ten minutes, and forty-two standard seconds.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12852 Read Count: 2870
[Report This] Published: 01/02/2014 Updated: 01/02/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/20/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely beautiful, a true piece of art. Their characters were spot on, the plot advanced smoothly and the descriptions were so vivid I could see the events unfolding. Your skills as a writer are undeniable, that's for sure.

Thank you very much for sharing this story with us! I'm looking forward to reading more from you :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! Thank you so much. I'm blushing. 

A Matter of Biology by museaway Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

In retrospect, Jim supposed he should have noticed the signs that something was, well, off with Spock. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Pon Farr
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Hey, Sweetheart
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4291 Read Count: 5614
[Report This] Published: 02/07/2014 Updated: 02/07/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute, well-written and bittersweet. Characterization was spot on, and your interpretation of the pon farr made this a very enjoyable and different view of the Time. Love it :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This was a really different take for me, so it was a fun story to write. (Mostly) angst free! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. 

Summary:

This is my contribution to the K/S Sweethearts challenge on LJ/Tumblr. The prompt was given to me by T'Lara. She asked me to write a Valentine's story around Jim confessing his love to Spock in Golic. The problem is, Jim is getting is a Golic crash course from a less than reputable source and winds up saying all manner of ridiculous phrases rather than anything remotely romantic.

Porn with a dash of silly.

To me this reads as mostly TOS, but I wrote it with the intent that it could go either way, and so have tagged it accordingly. ;)


Happy Valentine's Day, everyone.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4454 Read Count: 3024
[Report This] Published: 02/14/2014 Updated: 02/14/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just... Fuck, this was so bloody hot! Thank you gazillion times for sharing this wonderful piece :)

Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you liked it! <3 Thank you for the wonderful words and the pretty stars.

Jim And Spock Go On A Date by Cate Adams Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Written for Valentine's Day.  McCoy attempts to bring some, in his opinion, much-needed romance to the lives of his two friends.  He soon figures out that love doesn't necessarily require traditional forms of expression.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2704 Read Count: 2416
[Report This] Published: 02/14/2014 Updated: 02/14/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 02/25/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Jim And Spock Go On A Date

Poor Bones, he's such a sweetheart! I feel sorry for him, even though this was all in all a lovely piece of fluff :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm so glad you liked it!  -C

Till Morning's Light by lah_mrh Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

During their time in New York of the past, Spock is cold one night. Kirk has a perfectly logical solution.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 656 Read Count: 3640
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2014 Updated: 03/08/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How very sweet! Thanks for sharing this nibble-sized treat :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Sing Me A Song by DarkLadySethra Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Short poem of Kirk to Spock.


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86 Read Count: 1590
[Report This] Published: 03/15/2014 Updated: 03/15/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this is beautiful! It has so much Vulcan culture in it, but still is light, easy to read and evokes many emotions and pictures in the mind of the reader. Well done :)

Sinistre by Fugitive Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Reposted due to a request.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1763 Read Count: 1191
[Report This] Published: 03/23/2014 Updated: 03/23/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, that was sweeter than a sugar-coated baby bunny on a marshmallow cloud! Dear little Spocksie is cute

Author's Response:

LOL thank you!

 

Getting Ready by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Spock is ready to show Jim a good time while on Shore Leave. 

Art by Tarenteljazz


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Erotica, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Kink, None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1168 Read Count: 2846
[Report This] Published: 09/16/2014 Updated: 10/06/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 10/13/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh gods Spock's smile... <3

Learning by SheepOh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

''Kirk and Spock's first time had fortunately not been a t Pon Farr's hand, This had allowed the to take their time and truly discover each other, what aroused and pleasured them. One of the first things they had learned was that Spock liked to wath.''


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 662 Read Count: 858
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2014 Updated: 10/12/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/13/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Needs a bit polishing, but otherwise the idea is good and I like your style of writing! You have a great starting point here, and your story moves forward with just the right speed. I didn't give you full stars because of the typos and some repetition, but I'm certain you have talent =) Keep up writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'll try to pay a bit more attention to what you  pointed out in my next works. As for the typos, I'll check and correct them right away!

All About That Bass by spock2U Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Kirk should know better than to get Spock, his stoic Second In Command, rip roaring drunk on Romulan Ale AND Chocolate and then pass him the mic on Karaoke night. Because sometimes, when a man's reserve implodes with the force of three supernovas, you get even more than you bargained for...


Categories: Filks and Songs
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Fluff, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: FILKS
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 428 Read Count: 1620
[Report This] Published: 12/16/2014 Updated: 12/16/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/16/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I honestly don't know whether to cry or laugh... This is... oh god. All I can think of is the galaxy-sized shame crushing poor Spock the following morning :S

The pic is cool tho :D

 



Author's Response:

I hope you'll never hear the song the same way ever again ;)

Summary:

Prompt: Star Trek (TOS) In the middle of their shift Kirk starts a convo with Spock and just goes at it with the flirting and suggestive comments in front of everyone. Kirk thinks he's being very subtle (which he totally isn't)


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 818 Read Count: 2456
[Report This] Published: 01/08/2015 Updated: 01/09/2015
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too adorable! Loved the ending :)

Drop Your Pants by lah_mrh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Spock wants to be spanked. Kirk is happy to oblige.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 869 Read Count: 2194
[Report This] Published: 01/09/2015 Updated: 01/09/2015
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reading this story caused reflex-like grins and insane smirks to the probable concern of fellow passengers on the bus. Great piece, I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

Author's Response:

You read smut on the bus? You're braver than I am. I'm glad you liked it, though!