Penname: plaktow [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/28/2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

A humble request: if you read my stories, please spend a few seconds to rate it. All comments are also welcome. English isn't my native language, so apologies for all the silly mistakes in my stories.


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Starfleet Quartermaster's Prototype by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

This is my answer to SoldierGirl's Wrap Tunic Challenge--not that I don't love the Fetish in Green, but I wanted something longer, something that exposed more--sort of like Jim's tunic (snicker).

Enjoy


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Wrap Tunic Challenge!
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1939 Read Count: 6025
[Report This] Published: 08/16/2011 Updated: 08/16/2011
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/14/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh yes. Yes indeed. Do I need to say more?

Yeah, I didn't think so.

My Enemy's Enemy by eimeo Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Can’t decide between top!Kirk and bottom!Kirk? Me too. And with this PWP, you don’t have to! Set during The Enemy Within, it’s two Kirks for the price of one...

Warnings for slight dubcon. Also, porn. Lots and lots of unrepentant porn. I don’t know if it’s technically PWP, since it’s also First Time (and that’s kind of a plot), but there’s certainly a lot of smut. I’m calling it PWPOALBOP (Plot? What Plot? Okay, A Little Bit Of Plot).

With thanks to T’Lara and Frodolass for the inspiration, and T’Lara again for betaing, despite being buried under a mountain of her own work.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dubious consent
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4652 Read Count: 4408
[Report This] Published: 08/21/2011 Updated: 08/21/2011
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/2014 Title: Chapter 1: My Enemy's Enemy

I'm thinking of something smart and constructive to say, but I seem to have compartementalized my rational thoughts to a tiny airlock and opened the outer hatch.

Just... fuck this was hot!!

Magnetized by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A moment of peaceful reflection. Only the two of them.
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89 Read Count: 1206
[Report This] Published: 03/03/2012 Updated: 03/10/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 03/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For some reason I just love the very first sentence: "Away from the daily routine of reports to sign, going into battle with any given enemy, here is our sanctuary." It sounds like  a soothing chant of a prayer :)

The artwork is sweet, too!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review. I love your art, and must read your stories when time permits. 

It's not usually like this by T nash-veh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Added Chapter 2

Also as a separate story see the prequel 'What It's Usually Like'

Jim's had a bad day - Spock was right as usual, and he feels the need to let some frustrations out.

I think these work as both TOS and Abrams Universe, but tell me if you disagree.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Bondage, Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn, Dominance/submission, Dubious consent, Explicit violence, Kink, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6572 Read Count: 7245
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2013 Updated: 04/02/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/02/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A very nice idea, although the language is a bit rough for my taste. The ending is sweet :)



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much for reviewing and commenting.  Yes, I think I could soften the swearing and it might improve this story a bit.  Got a little carried away with the vulgarity.  I'm pleased you liked the ending.  I hope you will read and comment on Chapter 2 as well.  I have it in mind to clean these chapters up a bit, and add another chapter or perhaps two, and all comments will be taken into consideration.  

Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/25/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Trying... to... focus on typing... brain short-circuited...

Holy sh*t this was awesome! A definite improvement from the 1st chapter, and a decidedly hot piece of slash. Not only the action, but the sweetness and clumsiness of Jim in the beginning was absolutely endearing. I'm so glad they were finally able to understand each other :)

The only criticism I have is about the phrase "like the moon over Vulcan". The Vulcan homeworld, natively known as T'Khasi, has no moons. (http://stexpanded.wikia.com/wiki/Vulcan_(planet))



Author's Response:

Oh - thank you so much for pointing out there is no Vulcan moon!  I'll have to get that fixed.  And I'm so pleased you read and enjoyed and commented.  I do so LOVE getting comments, and yours is so wonderful - thank you for pointing out what you enjoyed.  

The Dialect by Fugitive Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary:

Kirk has ordered some language disks from Vulcan to help him understand his First Officer, and maybe help him seduce the Vulcan.  What he finds, changes his whole approach.

 

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19946 Read Count: 44609
[Report This] Published: 05/11/2013 Updated: 12/03/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/29/2013 Title: Chapter 4: A Side Dish of Shame

" I think it is because I am torn between having them explain the hand gestures to each other, and the alternative (shagging each other's brains out"

I vote for the latter option, if you don't mind, thankyouverymuch. Your story so far is absolutely brilliant! But onwards to the next chapter ->



Author's Response:

LOL I promise, lots of shagging each other's brains out, after the 31st August floo-fla is over!  Then I will write therapeutic shagging to within an inch of their cotton-pickin', pointy-eared, one-track minds!

And thank you!

 

Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 08/30/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Caught in the Act

And here I was, thinking that the story got to a boring official part with diplomatic visits and what not. Sometimes I love being wrong! 



Author's Response:

Thank you LOL.  Some diplomats know how to have buckets of fun, don't they!?

 

Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 08/30/2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Vulcan Toes and Sand Worms

"I beg forgiveness."

Granted!



Author's Response:

LOL.... and the toe-fetishists come tiptoeing one-by-one out of the bedroom, looking sheepish.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 09/08/2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Confusion

This is torture! So insanely hot!

"Do you like being had up against the wall… Doctor?"
Okay I'm officially your fan now. Holy hell... plz plz plz plz submit the next chapter, like, how about, NOW?

 

 



Author's Response:

Nawwww, thank you!  I loved that line, too.  I don't know why. :)

 

Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/03/2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Spoken in Tongues

Hhnnnnnggh... I'm not even into hands, as such, but damn this was hot! I love seeing Spock inebriated and lusty, so thank you for this bed-time story :)

Author's Response:

Awwww.  Thank you.  I think Jim may have sabotaged the stasis unit for just this purpose ;)

 

Summary:

WARNING: THIS IS FUCKED UP. If you can't deal with pain play, then don't play.

DOUBLE WARNING: This fic is now a round robin. I will not be held responsible for the depths of depravity in which someone else (or myself) may take this fic. Out of my hands. Please see the warnings.

AUTHORS: If you're thinking about contributing to this round robin, please place any applicable warning at the top of your chapter before hitting submit. I have adjusted the story to reflect whatever warning may apply after chapter 2, since I'm not sure who will post what. If you fail to warn readers in the chapter notes the top of the chapter, message me so I can edit it for you. Thanks!

Also, please keep in mind that this fic is supposed to be dirty, but it's also supposed to be fun and in good humor. Please no serious themes, let's keep with the dirty porn fest, thanks!

~~~~

Also, fucked up ficlet series is fucked up.

We start with Sarek and his slave. K/S and other things to come in either chapter 2 or 3. Just trust me when I say this is likely going to be...weird and fucked up. I don't expect many people to read this, as I'm writing it for a special request, and I expect even fewer people to review.

Never really done a slave fic, or a mirror fic or a dom/sub fic...MAY AS WELL DO THEM ALL AT ONCE!! lol


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, Gary Mitchell, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Stonn, Sulu
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Slave fic
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe, Mirror Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission, Dubious consent, Kink, Non-consensual sex
Series: Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3568 Read Count: 13395
[Report This] Published: 06/04/2013 Updated: 03/04/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 11/14/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

.... I really will never, ever let anyone know that I grinned through the whole chapter. You'll never find out this was a most enjoyable sick little story! >;-]

PS. I will now try to stop thinking about Mr. Slave and Lemmiwinks the gerbil...

Taming a Unicorn by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Now done!

 

This is in response to Scarlettmoon7's challenge: A story Where Spock courts Kirk.

I haven't seen Into Darkness so feel free to base this on 2009 or to
include ST:ID or go AU. ---- Prompt: Kirk saw a lot of TOS from the mind meld
with Spock. Kirk got Kirk's POV b/c the originals had melded alot and info was
subconsciously shared. Kirk is aware they are th'y'la but doesn't want to get
involved as he was aware of all the longing/heartbreak TOS!Kirk went through,
and the relationship never really got off the ground. There was always
something: T'Pring, Vulcan mentality, Leila, snow woman, sky woman, Romulan
woman, Pike, tribbles, logic, being left for Gol, Arrogant Presumption, Nexus,
Picard, dying alone.... Although Nu!Kirk is convinced he'll die alone he
doesn't want to long/Pine for someone his whole life. So Spock, who has watched
the awesomeness of Kirk, and fallen for him, must convince him to become
involved with him. Should involve the normal clichéd abandoned!Kirk, sad
childhood, fear of being left behind or alone.

 

I'm hoping this will only be 3-4 chapters, so no long sagas.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Story Where Spock Courts Kirk
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12179 Read Count: 33251
[Report This] Published: 09/03/2013 Updated: 10/17/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"I was wondering"... LOL, that's Spock being so utterly himself! I bet Jim never guessed just what he was going to lose ... :P

Protector of Logic by Farfalla Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Spock isn't going to the Enterprise's costume party because he doesn't think it's logcal, but Kirk wins him over with logic by pointing out that his own Alexander the Great costume isn't complete without a Hephaestion. And then Kirk's costume turns out to be even skimpier than Spock was expecting! Written in a Don Pablo's restaurant, and the story turned out so hot that the restaurant was later torn down completely and a new one built in its place -- a new one called BJ's. Go figure.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Fluff, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3435 Read Count: 1803
[Report This] Published: 09/08/2013 Updated: 09/08/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/18/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Protector of Logic

What a strange but pleasant mixture of sweetness, logic, love and anatomical exactness! Made me giggle a few times, especially your idea of Scotty's costume :D

The only thing that bothered me a bit was how eagerly and quickly Spock began fondling Jim's groin. True, it was logical, but all that information he had on sex between men could've given him a few tips on foreplay. Logically he might have followed the "instructions" until he had sufficient empirical evidence what works with Jim?

Anyway this was a nice story, and indeed fun to read :)

Dream Deferred by TDazz Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

Jim has been having disturbing dreams, but it doesn't seem all that unusual, given everything that has happened in the last year. In an act of compassion, Spock attempts to help Jim calm his mind by melding with him, but something goes awry.

S/U and K/M to start with, then maybe some K/S/M at some point...

Beware: het ahead.

Written in response to Nocturnal Nightengale's challenge Consequences of a Mind Meld


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80419 Read Count: 26621
[Report This] Published: 09/21/2013 Updated: 01/27/2014
Reviewer: plaktow Signed
Date: 10/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Had to comment on your description, since I thought your warning "het ahead" was incredibly funny - until I inmediately afterwards thought "het? Eeeeeww!" :p

Author's Response:

lol!  Thanks for sharing.  Hope the het's not too kinky for you!

The Thistle by EllenD Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

An alternate end to the 2009 movie. Spock never shows up for the post of science officer and instead, resigns from Starfleet to pursue a scientific mission for New Vulcan. Kirk doesn't see him agan until a year later, as an attraction in an Orion brothel. A story about endurance, salvation, and love in unlikely places.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Gary Mitchell, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock, Slave fic
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Explicit violence, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16070 Read Count: 7122
[Report This] Published: 09/23/2013 Updated: 10/22/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/11/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This second chapter was, in my opinion, much better than the first one. Your description of the brothel was very eloquent, and didn't take too much space from the actual plot. I especially enjoyed the casual chat between Bones and Jim - you got their characters exactly right! Also, the pace of the story in the second chapter is excellent. The fight wasn't too long, and the path connecting Jim and Spock was teasingly long but enjoyable :)

I'm looking forward for the next chapter - keep up the fantastic writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad  you think so. I think it's very important to get the voices of the characters right, so I'm glad I've succeeded.

I Watched by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

I'm really sorry about this. Facebook dares are a baaad thing. This one involved JIm in only his athletic socks and in his captain's chair, with Spock watching. I'm sorry.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1844 Read Count: 2982
[Report This] Published: 09/26/2013 Updated: 09/26/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Delicious! You have some real talent, Cynthia :)

A Lesson In Possession by kitausu Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Pon Farr hits and Jim can't stay away. Full of confidence (and more than a little horny) he strolls right into Spock's quarters to help his lover through this rough patch, because who but him can handle a sex-crazed Vulcan? But what he didn't expect was to get caught in the fires so completely...

Basically a handful of chapters full of hard, steaming Pon-Farr-sex. Occassionaly agressive, slight dub-con, possible dom/sub, top/bottom varies, but all in all sex-fluff. You are hereby warned!


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Dubious consent
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4417 Read Count: 13974
[Report This] Published: 10/10/2013 Updated: 10/14/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/14/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mmh, absolutely delicious! Can't wait to read more!

It's Called Spocolate by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

I found a fragment in my "what do I do with this?" pile and decided it was high time for something other than a work in progress. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2055 Read Count: 3069
[Report This] Published: 10/18/2013 Updated: 10/18/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet, funny and hot. Simply put: excellent! Thank you for sharing this :)

<3

 

Half of a Half by BlackMarket Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Love is a human emotion. Vulcans do not love.

I am of mixed race.

My cells are that of Vulcan and of human. Is it appropriate for me to say I am human?

Humans love and as I love Jim, then yes—

I find this appropriate.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2090 Read Count: 3148
[Report This] Published: 10/23/2013 Updated: 10/23/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was insanely good. I love the atmosphere you created, and I could almost hear Spock recite these very words. I don't know what to say... this was absolutely wonderful.


Thank you; BlackMarket.



Author's Response: Oh my goodness! Thank you for leaving such a beautiful comment!

Walking Him Down The Aisle by Matti Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

An assumption worked its way into this story to justify the presence of Dr.McCoy in it. Pon farr with Bones’ participation. Not in the sense you might think of, strictly in the medical sense.

This story was originally written in Russian. With thanks to Skaylin for translation and to ForgottenOne for betaing the English version.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Pon Farr
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7730 Read Count: 2972
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2013 Updated: 10/30/2013
Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Stories as wonderful as this are rare, and I seriously hope we get to read more from you! I absolutely loved the way you describe everything from Bones's point of view, but still managed to bring out Jim's and Spock's views as well. This was really funny and incredibly sweet at the same time. Loved it!



Author's Response:

From Skaylin, the translator: Thank you for this wonderful review from both me and Matti, the author! Reviews like this make me feel that I managed to convey the original's humor and charm. Actually, Matti wrote a lot more K/S stories in Russian, but no one has gotten to translating them yet. I hope that will be changed!