Penname: iamthejabberwocky [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 09/18/2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

[Report This]
Reviews by iamthejabberwocky
Evolving Toward Forever by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Some things are inevitable though the path is often a rocky one.
Originally published 2002 in First Time #55.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Evolving Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32346 Read Count: 17769
[Report This] Published: 12/18/2005 Updated: 12/18/2005
Reviewer: iamthejabberwocky Signed
Date: 09/23/2009 Title: Chapter 1: complete

That was wonderful!  :D  I was a bit nervous as I began to read the more... colorful bits, but I shouldn't have been.  The buildup was lovely, and while the language was rather vivid, it was never crude and you never simply took the physical feelings in lieu of the more complex emotions.  Well done!



Author's Response: Thanks! Love scenes are quite difficult for me to write, so it's great to hear when they work for someone. So glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reading and commenting.