Date: 03/23/2012 5:26 PM Title: Prologue
argh...that missing word was supposed to be "fast"
Date: 03/23/2012 5:25 PM Title: Prologue
This is an interesting story premise, but I can tell you right away that the pace of story telling is too for me to enjoy. I recommend that you slow down if you really want to end up with a quality story at the end of the day rather than accumulating a certain number of quick reviews. Take your time. Build your scenes, your character interaction and dialoge. That's what this story deserves.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, Yeah! I love sequels!
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2009 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
It was a very funny fast paced summary of the movie with a little twist. Thanks...can't wait till Jim delivers.
Date: 06/30/2009 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter :D next one sounds interesting as well! cant wait!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Next chapter up now. Thanks for reading :D
Date: 06/25/2009 5:57 PM Title: Prologue
:O sulu/chekov how cute!
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Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
Date: 06/24/2009 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
yay excitement, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
YAY! I'm glad you like it. Next chap up tomorrow. Thanks for commenting :D
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2009 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
again another great chapter :) *waits patiently for next*
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I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
Date: 06/23/2009 9:41 PM Title: Prologue
an interesting premise :)
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Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2009 10:40 AM Title: Prologue
very nice start! :D you've got me interested, would love to read another chapter!
Author's Response:
That's good to know. Thanks for reading and commenting. Next chapter should be up tomorrow :D