Date: 08/04/2009 5:56 PM Title: Unusual Situation
*phew* I caught up! and now I can't wait for more!
It's a very interesting, wonderful story, which is why i would love to beta for or with you. I did see your author's note saying that you'd be editing chapters... well, if I can help at all, please let me know ^^
I have a livejournal, if that's something that might make communication easier. The username is the same.
anywhooooo yay! :waits for update:
Date: 06/30/2009 1:16 PM Title: Meeting of Minds
Might I reccomend using a beta. There are some words that are missused in here. For example you used 'there' when you meant to use they're. And 'bare' when you meant 'bear'. If it a wonderful story besies that but it can throw off the mind when reading through the story
Date: 06/20/2009 11:50 PM Title: Conflict
i have got to say that the plot in your story is pleasing. The concept of Kirk and spock having a bond that is not wanted by spock (though in other aspects he most definatly seems to want it) is quite original, and i must express that i continue to read this with enthusiastic facsination. I hope to see this continued!
Date: 06/20/2009 8:40 PM Title: Conflict
Oh oh! I goofed and read a story before it was completed! And, of course, it happensto be a really good one! I hope you do finish it and not leave it hanging liek so many authors do!
Hehe don't worry I plan on finishing this fic no matter what :).