Date: 01/16/2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hm, my previous comment vanished, trying again: this is lovely! So warm and intent, and I love the imagery you used for the meld, particularly the approaching rainstorm; a metaphor for death, both a relief and a danger. I really hope you will write more in this fandom!
Date: 06/07/2009 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with the previous reviewer--this is absolutely breathtaking. Imagery makes the story for me--just beautiful and so touching. Thank you so much and please write more.
Thank you for the kind and gracioius review! The idea was something that popped into my head during the very rainy week we just had. I am working on a much longer (and less serious) New!Kirk/McCoy story, but I'm a sloooow writer so stay tuned. Thanks again!
Date: 06/07/2009 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
The imagery was breathtaking. I really like the idea of Spock taking Jim out of what was going on and into a memory, using the coming rainstorm as such a wonderful symbol of what's to come. It could be read pre-slash, but I was poked over to this piece by a gen reader. You should consider posting this link at some of the communities out there because 0 reviews? I don't believe it. Not for a beautiful piece like this. Thank you for writing this.
Thank you so much for being my "first" (reviewer, of anything I've ever posted to a an archive). I must say among the other benefits of fanfic writing, it's made me learn a lot more about the Trek universe. I now know something about Vulcan geography (thanks to the fabulous Memory Alpha). Maybe that will win me a bar bet some day. In the meantime, humblest thanks for taking the time to review.