Date: 01/05/2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
First, I have to say that I cried like a drunk prostitute at that scene in the movie just imagining what was going on their heads. This story was so good even if it did bring some of tose tears back. The ending was enoguh reassurance for me as well as Jim. ^.^
Second, I love your writing. You are amazing.
Date: 08/22/2009 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to point out that Kirk NEVER HAD a "ready room", something I mentioned to Farf when she first showed this story to me but which she couldn't change at that point (I think it was already on her site or something).
Other than that, I have only praise for this sweet/cute/original story that so accurately portrays Spock's and Kirk's feelings for each other and gets Spock's "nerdiness" right (though for some reason I tend not to think of him so much that way after STII, which this is obviously set after). Loved the part where their hands touched--they finally got to do that without the glass in the way. :^D