Date: 03/29/2009 1:48 AM Title: 1
I don't know if it's because of corroborative evidence over time, or something psychic, but I could see this story coming from a mile away ;) (when seeing the title/description there). *Obviously* it would be the absolute "nightmare" of some hostile alien creature knowing/sensing the truth about them and turning that to suit questionable private purposes... (*shivers*) In my mind, that is the central reason why they hide in plain sight, and being military they can do so quite well (even at the expense of showing love) - in order to get to know them so intimately, one would need proceed with the utmost respect (so totally not what Sylvia does!).
Good plot, it challenges me to think about what kind of "alien creature" I personally am. I take out just one point though, for their choosing to play Sylvia's game... If not even that fake "God" Superbeing could know their truth, there's no reason for them to get this desperate! lol.
Author's Response: The image of Kirk and Spock in manacles was just too good to let go, without some further exploration. Glad you liked it.
Date: 03/27/2009 10:34 AM Title: 1
I saw the warning bondage and i almost passed it over, that usually isn't my thing, but this story was wonderful. So descriptive and touching. Loved it.
Author's Response: I'm really pleased you decided to read this story, thank you.