Date: 07/07/2008 2:13 AM Title: Complete Story
I like the way you explored Janice Rand and her motivations. Her parting line to Jim was great, and I loved Kirk's present to Spock.
I did feel that the sex scenes were a little contrived at times (the descriptions seemed to be so typical for humans and I didn't feel any of Spock's personality in them). But those were only a small part of the story so I enjoyed it over all.
Author's Response: Too true about the sex. One of my first 'encounter' it was quite difficult for me to write AND very evident. Thanks for you wonderful reviews.