Reviews For The Ultimate Gift
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Reviewer: boruchcm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 2:13 AM Title: Complete Story

I like the way you explored Janice Rand and her motivations. Her parting line to Jim was great, and I loved Kirk's present to Spock. I did feel that the sex scenes were a little contrived at times (the descriptions seemed to be so typical for humans and I didn't feel any of Spock's personality in them). But those were only a small part of the story so I enjoyed it over all.

Author's Response: Too true about the sex. One of my first 'encounter' it was quite difficult for me to write AND very evident. Thanks for you wonderful reviews.

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