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Reviewer: Kara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2010 11:56 PM Title: Complete story

That was a really good, interesting read. Personally, I find your Kirk and Spock very convincing (and I really loved this unexpected "I love you", actually I consider it quite Spockian.

 

Thank you :).

Reviewer: Idic Savant Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 5:05 PM Title: Complete story

You have good ideas here. I don't know if English is or is not your native language (if it isn't, congratulations for being able to write in a nonnative tongue), but there are too many spelling and grammatical errors for me, personally, to be able to enjoy your work as it ought to be enjoyed. I don't mean to be insulting, and it's true I'm a fairly harsh critic. I hope as you keep writing you'll find a helpful beta reader, because there is good work here in terms of content and emotion and plot. It just needs to be cleaned up structurally.

Author's Response: Thank you for your observation. I will check on the version I posted. I thought it was the edited one that was published in Thyla.

Reviewer: boruchcm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 1:09 AM Title: Complete story

Good for Miranda for sending enough of a message to start breaking the wall down in Kirk's head. I found the OCs very intriguiging and well developed. The precursor to TNG's visor was a nice touch.

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