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Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2019 6:11 PM Title: Torn

This is a rather bleak holiday offering, but I think it mirrors the feelings that many people have when they are separated from their loved ones by distance or death, especially at the holidays.  Moreover, your story has the benefit of being unusual in that it appears that their bond simply failed due to time and distance.  This is not consistent with my own beliefs about their relationship, but it has its own validity.  I look forward to seeing more offerings in the future.

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