Reviews For Before the storm
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Reviewer: LSPINGLES Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

So NOW I have to read Heatwave.  I have always been curious about the dynamic between Kirk/Selik/Spock.  I think you did a great job of capturing what it must be like for Spock.

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2018 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your premise of Spock Prime being onboard with Kirk and nu/Spock was intriguing to me so I read your story.  I think you did a good job of portraying how nu/Spock might feel when he sees the man he will be but isn't yet and how much easier his life will be.  And it definitely would be intimidating to want a relationship you don't have yet and see how easily you could lose it to a being who has years more experience in it.  I wasn't crazy about the Kirk-Spock sex stuff, but everyone has their hangups and that it mine.  To me, old Spock shouldn't be intimate with young Kirk.  I hope to see more from you.

 

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