Date: 09/07/2018 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your premise of Spock Prime being onboard with Kirk and nu/Spock was intriguing to me so I read your story. I think you did a good job of portraying how nu/Spock might feel when he sees the man he will be but isn't yet and how much easier his life will be. And it definitely would be intimidating to want a relationship you don't have yet and see how easily you could lose it to a being who has years more experience in it. I wasn't crazy about the Kirk-Spock sex stuff, but everyone has their hangups and that it mine. To me, old Spock shouldn't be intimate with young Kirk. I hope to see more from you.